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Re: Maximum Ride
I don't think there is going to be a fourth one. It said on the cover that it was the end. What was so depressing about the 3rd one? I ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: Jen
Hey! I like this. It is short and simple, and leaves you wanting to know more. I like how you stated that it seemed like summer had just began, because ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: The Gifted and the Cursed: Super-Kids in Training
Hey! I wrote this novel a couple of months ago, and I wanted to people to critique it, so if you have a like.. a long time, check it out! ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: ALOOO!!!!!!!!
Awesome poem! I really like it. Great way to introduce yourself! I thought it was pretty funny!!! Well, welcome! My name is bigbadbear or more commonly known as the Great ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: new
Hey! I'm bigbadbear or more commonly know as the Great BBB. Call me what you will. Welcome! If you have any questions or stuff (man do I sound like other ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: Maximum Ride
Okay, I have finished the whole series of Maximum Ride and I just absolutely loved it! I mean, how could you not? I just love how Max is so clever ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: Something Out There
Oh my gosh! This so cool! It grabbed me from the start! Totally mysterious. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. I just loved it! lol There was only some ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: Forever and always.
Hey! Fantastic story! I only thought a couple things were wrong: Ok, place yourself in Jack's Mother's shoes. Would you really let your 18 year old ask a girl to ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #7
Chapter Seven Christian knew that Krobeth was getting mad at him for asking all of these questions. It seemed to Christian that Krobeth was hiding something from him, or, not ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: We Used To Be
Hey! I am (was) planning to write a musical... :D about Beautifully Evil, my novel, and this is a song that Christian, the MC sings and I just want to ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
Hey! I didn't cry, but I seriously thought about it. When Harry walked into the forest..with his parents, Serious..and all of them..oh gosh...it's sad. But I kinda had a suspicion ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: Does not have any real subject
Uh..what?
Oct 20, 2007 -
Re: Does not have any real subject
Uh..what?
Oct 20, 2007 -
Re: Hi
Hey! Well, we are friends, so I just wanted to say some stuff. If you are ever in need of someone to critique your work, then by all means, ask ...
Oct 20, 2007 -
Re: Safe Haven - Prologue
Wow! I really liked this! I thought it was clever and exciting. But, (you don't have to add this if you don't wanna) I think you should put where it ...
Oct 20, 2007
