BigBadBear

Chapter Eleven Three days flew by like a jet. Christian anticipated his soon-to-be girlfriend. He stared at her in the halls, and lunch and all of sixth period. Christian wished ...

Hey! Again, wonderful. Yeah, it is kinda rushed, but I mean, whose isn't? If yours isn't then bite me. lol anyway, I loved it. You create suspense, and like the ...

Holy cow. You are just like pure talent. This story totally captivated me. I really like how you say like, "Just a litlle bit of Faith remained in her arms." ...

Wow.. Very very cool. I really like your ending where it said, "As long as one Moon Child lived, there was Faith." I got major goosebumps there. This is fantastic! ...

Oh yeah, this is the first part of three books. The Gifted and the Cursed is a trilogy, and the prolouge of each book really just is important to the ...

Hm.. Interesting. I really liked this. Again, you put your mind to work and create this.. I like it the same as I did Chapter One. I always seem to ...

Chapter Ten Christian was suspended from school for a week because of the fire incident. Apparently, the principal thought that he was too dangerous to be kept at school, and ...

I'm best at the action, because that is what makes up a story. Who wants to read a story with no good action? That's where I come in. . And ...

Hey again! Once again, Kim hits the spot and beautifully writes this. It is fantastic! I cannot believe that you are this great of an author. No other mistakes that ...

hey! What's up? Welcome to YWS! lol I found this site the same way you did! Well, like what kind of stories? Action? Romance? If you have any questions just ...

Creative, but I have no clue how to say it. Ill give it a 6/10

*blushes* no.. we never really performed this play.. I was so happy, but then they said no, and I was so mad.. but it's a great play! BBB

Chapter Nine Christian was stupefied by the night’s events. He raced back home and threw the covers upon his head. He could never go back to Krobeth’s house after this ...

How can there be a fourth one, if Max has already saved the world? Isn't that what Jeb said she was designed for? Hm..I don't like the idea of a ...

Chapter Eight Christian knocked, and when Krobeth had opened the door, Christian came crawling through and swiftly sat in the red, velvet chair. “What are you doing here? You are ...