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Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
Hm... 4/5. I don't like emos. If you do, then bite me.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #2
She could not, and would not, ever call the police. They had no telephone, and if her father would ever of caught her, then she would be in for it. ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Werewolves!
Hey! I have decided some things about my werewovles: (If you have any others, please tell me) 1. Werewolves can morph whenever they want. 2. Werewolves cannot breed. Shewolves do ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Critique the Person Above You!
Good Job, Razor!
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: Hormones, Homework, and Hot Lunches- Period 3
Hey! I really liked this. You did a great job. The only thing that kind of bothered me is that you didn't put in is what you do in that ...
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: Mortal Death, Immortal love
uh, this is really cool. The only thing I wonder is how old is Alexial? Cuz if she is like a teenager, that would be totally gross. Anway, other than ...
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Sometimes I wonder if there even is a God, ever since I have been abused." -Mary "Mary, you know I have tried to talk your father out of it." -Christian ...
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil Epilogue
Epilogue Outside of the mansion, police swarmed the yard and house. After Christy-Ann had come out alive, they ran in as fast as they could and found Christian, terrified as ...
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: What's your NaNo 2007 about?
Title: Midnight Darkness Genre: Horror/Action Adventure Synopsis: Landon Maxfield grew up learning to fear werewolves. When he discovers that his English teacher is a werewolf, Landon is thrust into t
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Ah-ha! I have found you!!!!
Hey! Welcome! I am the great and terrible Bigbadbear, but you can call me BBB for short. Well, I am writing a book about werewovles too! We have one thing ...
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Rushing Water
Hm... very interesting. There are just some minor things that you need to change: 1. Stop acting like a baby. You're fourteen for heavens sake!" Great way of showing Ellie's ...
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #12-13
Chapter Twelve There was light…but it fades away…pain…now it is gone…there is a red, velvet chair in sight…now it is all black…noise…as if knocking on wood…more pain…blinding lightâ€
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Hi
Hey! What's up? I'm sure that you will soon become addicted to this site, just like so many of our other dedicated members. Well, what do you like to write? ...
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Faith: Chapter Two
Hey! Woah! That was cool! Your chapter was kinda short compared to #1, but oh well. Yeah, she did seem to change her age.. well. you knwo what I'm talking ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: Something Out There
Great job Kimmy! There is not much that I can say, but that you are doing an excellent job. I'm glad that you are doing so well! BBB
Oct 25, 2007
