BigBadBear

Does this mean that we can post our chapters on this NaNo forum? OH.. I didn't know that!

Awww. this is awesome! I didn't notice any errors! I am very proud of you, Kim. Your story is freaking awesome! The only thing I wonder is why Set it ...

Beauty is divine... Beauty can reflect The woman left inside That monster of a pit. Do not be so vain, That you cannot see, Everything that lay in sight Everything...and ...

So began the adventures of Frederick and the G-Birds. “So…” Taffy said, “what do we do? I mean, where do we begin?” Frederick answered, “Well, my family always starts by ...

About the first stanza: I couldn't find another word to rhyme with seems. So I just put brings in there and made other words that flowed into it. Sorry about ...

Yeah, I was typing too fast. Sorry about that! I was just so excited!

Hm.. I like it.. there are only a few errors: Exclaimed Don't capitalize! in the infinants eyes infinants = infants boys father This should be boy's father. "Shh, hold on ...

Hey! Uh, I don't know if this is a Narrative Poem, so I just put it here because it sounded like what this poem is about. I just finished this ...

Uh oh.. Is it bad to have already outlined everything in every chapter? *looks around* uh oh... anyway, the thing I fear most is finishing the novel, BUT NOT HAVING ...

Hey Guys! Let's make this the "Scariest Story You Ever Did Read." Alright, I'll begin. We should each write 1-2 paragraphs and let's make this freaky for Halloween tomorrow: ________________________ ...

Hey! Well, I'm here to critique and to read your story cuz it's freaking awesome! Well, here I go! The man didn’t come back instead the boy who had taken ...

There! I have gotten the first like eight pages. I'll keep doing it! It takes me a while, but it will all be done eventually! I really like it! You ...

Yeah, if you could. Anything, from Flying South (sorta) to my beautifully Evil novel. Whatever floats your boat. BBB (I have just downloaded and I'm reading right now!!)

Hey! Great job again! The only thing that I feel that this story is missing is emotions. Elizabeth is just kinda.. blah... If you had just been kidnapped, what would ...

Whoa! What the heck is happening? Anyway, I noticed only one thing You said, "mom, dad?" You should put it "Mom? Dad?" Make sure you capitalize Mom and Dad because ...