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Re: Something Out There
Hey sorry about that. I had to stop cuz my keyboard went crazy. Sorry Anyway, there were only two things I noticed. Simply typos. A ripple of laughter came from ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Something Out There
Ohhh... freaky! Kim, this is fantastic! I love reading this novel and will be sad when it's over.`
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Eighteen Hundred Seconds ~ Part I of III
Hey! Great job! I really liked this. You did a great job! I really liked your charactors and setting. Cool! Keep writing! BBB
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: NanoWriMo Wordcount '07
11536! Yay! 31 pages in total! Yay me! BBB
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Nano chapter 2 pt 1
Oh my gosh! You hit the jackpot! Another brilliant story. The only thing I could say was: You are sounding too much like Maximum Ride. Try not to copy the ...
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Re: Flyboy: Immortal
Oh cool! That's way cool! There was only one small thing: you said It was a mile before he slowed down. And then later you said Small oak trees below ...
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Re: NaNo Chapter one
Holy Crapola! That was the best chapter I have read in my life! Wow, you really amaze me, Cat. This is wonderful. I noticed no errors at all. Congrats! I ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Darkness #3
Chapter Three: My Transformation The flight back to New Jersey was worse than the one before. Payton was sick, and had to use two bags just to clean up his ...
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Re: A Hidden Sanctuary Ch1 Pt2
Ok. Here I am! Jake As this being the heading of the second part, underline it or put it in quotes or italizs it. pale blue pj bottoms. pj = ...
Nov 3, 2007 -
Re: NanoWriMo Wordcount '07
Yes! Finally! 10,436! Yay! I made my goal! Now I have to hit 15k by tonight! Uh oh.. better get typing! This is so much fun!
Nov 3, 2007 -
Re: NaNo Quotes
How about this? This is right before Landon gets bitten by Payton and transforms into a werewolf: I was terrified out of my mind! My worst fear, the very monster ...
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Re: NaNo Blues
Talk about stress! lol I think I will have a nervous breakdown! Ugh! Well, I kept waking up in the middle of the night wondering if everyone else's word counts ...
Nov 3, 2007 -
Re: NanoWriMo Wordcount '07
9,030! Man, I am going slow! I got to 8k in two days.. now I am typing like a turtle! lol Hey, if you guys could, could you please read ...
Nov 3, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Darkness #2 part two
He waved good-bye to the taxi driver, and dashed up the hill. Surprisingly, he didn’t even break a sweat because running around at night really helped him keep fit. Once ...
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Re: The Gifted and the Cursed: Super-Kids in Training
Hey! Thanks for that. Now I realize how much I need to change!
Nov 3, 2007