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Kim! Wow! That was amazing. There was only one line that bugged me: I excepted you and never asked you to change. I didn't really understand this. Other than that ...

"What are you talking about? It's behind bars! That there bars has enough volts to run New York City for a whole day!" Ivan exclaimed. "You don't need to kill ...

Fort Wolfgang was huge! I mean huge! The walls, the rooms, just everything about it was double its normal height! I felt pity for the builders of this place! I ...

"Do you really think that we should continue this tour?" Tanner said, and everyone looked at him. "I mean, we have just made an important discovery. Don't you think that ...

Sam! We are almost tied! I have 17,312! Yay! I forced myself to write a half an hour, and I wrote 2k! Yes! I will finish before you, Suzanne...just wait ...

"Shawn!" John shouted, and he climbed into the jeep, followed by Cedar. John sat by his daughter, who had tears streaming out of her eyes. Tanner noticed puncture wounds in ...

Whoa..cool! Kim I have got to say that you have EXTRODINARY talent. Yeah, I know, I didn't spell that right, but who cares. Wow...that's all I can say. I didn't ...

"Shawn! Get your butt over here!" John yelled, rushing to save his daughter. He was terrified out of his mind! The raptors were going to tear her limbs off, one ...

Lol. I haven't read the books but I found this very very funny! lol I really liked it. I will be looking forward to reading the next ones! Hurry! BBB

Chapter Five: Wolfgang In the dense, green canopy of the forest, Chief Mountain was hidden from view by thick trees. Their branches hung low and pine needles stuck out in ...

"What was that?" Ivan cried as he heard the loud gunshot. A moment later, one of the three raptors fell over dead. "Shawn! Shawn get over here!" John shouted hysterically. ...

What's a writing sprint? Sounds fun! I'll get more words that way! Anyway, I'm at 15,132! Yay! I am at the quarter mark...or am I? I don't care. Anyway, my ...

"Shawn! Shawn get back in here!" John shouted at his daughter. He unbuckled his seat belt, while Tanner looked around, wondering why there was a sudden commotion. John grumbled something ...

Tanner was instantly fascinated by the way that the raptors had supposedly torn up the triceratops. Their jaws must be more powerful than the mighty brontosauruses... He stared at the ...

Hey! This is really cool, considering that I have never heard of/read/played? Final Fantasy..if that is what this is. There are a few spelling errors, and some info dumps, but ...