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And so they were off, hopping from tree to tree. "What do you expect we will find at Station 2?" Tanner said, mystified by their goings. (sorry, I didn't know ...

Hey! Uh, I know how to put the map on. It's just like doing an advanced critique. You upload your document where it says like...idk...just a minute. You upload it ...

Amelia, you could at least give her some good advice and not to tear her down. I mean, come on! How would you feel if I said that your poem ...

Huh...this is interesting. I like it alot! I didn't really notice other things like spelling at stuff. Keep it up! Good job, Bri!

Chapter Six: My Trials and a Girl Named Lacy So I was sentenced to a couple of trials. No biggie…right? That’s the way I wished I thought. In fact, I ...

Suddenly, while Tanner was being pulled up, he heard scampering of feet, and looked down. Four V-Raptors jumped up, their teeth barely missing Tanner's shoe as the young boy screamed ...

Hey! Kim this is great. I thought that the Narrator was God, which He probably is. Anyway, Kim I loved this more than anything else you have written, besides your ...

Nothing happened at night. The only thing that did happen was when Ceder and Adri came over to the tree that Tanner, Shawn and John slept in. They slept in ...

(you guys, the T-Rex went into the forest. The only thing attack us right now are the Spino and the raptors. And I think that we should have Velo die, ...

"Whoa! Stand back, Shawn!" Tanner yelled, as he saw the T-Rex stumbling their way, but she didn't notice them. She was too stupid. Trees seemed to work great, unless you ...

And then I saw her. Yeah, you heard me right. A her. I have never seen a girl before in this fort. Well, to be truthful, I have never heard ...

"Kid! Get yer butt over by John, now! We can handle this guy!" Ceder shouted to Tanner, and the teenager obeyed. Quickly, he dropped the gun, and then picked it ...

(WHAT? Did you just kill Ivan??? How dare you!) There were gunshots, and the T-Rex roared, but Tanner was stuck in the stupid jeep. His leg was really killing him, ...

"DAD!" Shawn yelled, and dove out of the car. The big Rex hurdled itself at the jeep, knocking its head against the door, and it rolled over. Ivan was reminded ...

Tanner suddenly stopped halfway out the car. He turned slowly towards Ivan. "What? There are huge predators out there?" Tanner said. Ivan nodded, and Tanner got back into the car. ...