BigBadBear

"Go!" Adri yelled, and the group took off, splitting into two groups. Adri followed Tanner into the building, while John and Ceder slowly made their way over to the overturned ...

Yes! Finally! There! I have some of my stories on there! BBB

21k! Yes! Finally! That took me forever!

“Landon,” Payton said, as he closed the door. Inside the room was just an empty desk and a few chairs; nothing special. “Landon, there are some things about werewolves that ...

An hour later, nothing had changed. Nothing. Yes, Tanner admitted, that he wasn't as horrified or shocked anymore, but still, a young girl of sixteen, killed. Nothing made sense. Why ...

Everything happened so blurry, and so fast. Blurry and fast, yes, that is the only way that Tanner saw things. Fast and blurry. There was a gunshot, and a huge ...

Oh..this is really getting good, Kim! This is really great! I can't wait to read more. Only like a couple things to point out: "We are waiting on the pastor ...

Whatever. This movie rocked! I went and bought the soundtrack and stuff so now I know ALL of the words. You guys are lame who think that Hairspray was dumb. ...

When you were little you had a cubby house in the back of your yard. It sat prim and proper, These should be combined. Mr Teddy – and his accomplices ...

Kim, this was really good. I knew that it would be. There are only two things I noticed: "Her eyes are sky blue I share those to." To should be ...

(...Shawn is dead? *gasp* I was going to make Tanner fall in love w/ her!) Grr! "SHAWN!" Tanner yelled, and the dinosaur jerked its head towards Tanner and growled. Tanner ...

"Hey guys, what's that?" Tanner said, pointing inside the bird cage. There was a huge bird like dinosaur flying throughout the cage. "That's a Ptyradon," John said. "They are those ...

Hey! This is really good, I mean for a girl your age. It's really good and well written. I didn't find any errors. It flowed nicely and Cat, you did ...

(is Kawasaki in Japan? Oh...) "Let's go. I fear that the raptors have already made a plan to kill us." Tanner said quietly, so that Shawn wouldn't be afraid. Ceder ...

"Dad, how much further? My legs are killing me!" Shawn complained, and Tanner said, "Do you want me to carry you?" Shawn gasped and turned to face Tanner. "No! You ...