BigBadBear

Good. You are learning. I smirked in the werewolf kind of way. I knew that I had just had a delectable meal, suitable for a king. Why didn’t humans ever ...

Huh. Interesting. It would be something that I would pick up. It depends though, because if it were fantasy, I would put it right back, but if si-fi, I would ...

"Up here! Hurry!" Tanner yelled, and pointed to a cliff. "Climb!" Tanner grabbed onto a rock and pulled himself up, regularly glancing down at his companions to see if they ...

Yeah! another great section! I really liked this, like last time, but the only that that bothers me is it goes by really fast, but that might just be cause ...

Oh, cool! I have to say that I really liked this. I just love the name Nightmare for the MC. It was fantastic. The first paragraph was WAY too tell-y. ...

Uh...How are we supposed to give awards if we can't nominate? Just asking!

(sure, I'll start it cuz no one else will! Grr! I don't know what to say! I was hoping you guys would start the rampage, but no...I will) =( After ...

wow..This is really getting intense and really good! Great job! There was only one thing that I noticed this time: Sometimes you say, "Christians'" when it should be "Christian's" Unless ...

23,800. I'm gonna beat Razor's by the end of the day! Yeah! ...5k to go!

Sure! I'll join! Name: Tanner Lindsay Age 16 Appearance: Tall, blond, but not very muscular. He will come here to get strong. Reason for Coming: His father was a WW11 ...

"Will you guys just please shut up? We need to sleep!" Tanner cried, very upset. Everything that had happened that day suddenly rushed upon him: Shawn's death; Station Two; all ...

(oh ok. I'll post now) "Oh yeah," Tanner said, and then gasped as Adri applied painful pressure on one of his cuts, "I was just worried because...well, you know," Adri ...

(uh...What? I don't understand what you are asking. What DINO Tanner is afraid of? I'll make a post when you answer.)

Hey! Whoa! That was way cool! I loved it! The only thing that bugged me was that the whole scene when he/she? wakes up. It doesn't seem very realistic. What ...

"Yeah, let's go with Adri's idea," Tanner said, yawning. "I'm too tired to go on for now. I want to sleep." The sun was setting as they spoke, and John ...