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Re: Element of Fear
Huh. Yeah, I thought this was very clever. I would never have written such a cool poem. Ok, let me tell you somethings you need to change. "fear keeps us ...
Nov 17, 2007 -
Re: Fighting Back
k, Thanks for all of your help. I made the corrections. I really like this poem. I don't know why...
Nov 17, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Darkness #7 part one
Chapter Seven: My Mistake I stopped in front of her. She had gasped and put her arms around a tree. She knew she was trapped. There was no other way ...
Nov 17, 2007 -
Re: Jurassic Park
*We are stuck in a really awkward position. I would have posted, but I don't know what to say! Eek!*
Nov 17, 2007 -
Re: Fighting Back
*Author's note* Italics are like an echo, repeating the last few words of the last line. Staring into the cold, dark night, I see something coming. Something coming. I squint ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Life Is...
Sorry guys. I keep forgetting to post more. I will for sure post more on Monday, because it is in my history book. (sad) Anyway, PM me constantly to remind ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Well, it sounds like bees. Obviously. Anyway, other than that, it could be like...a big secret group or something that is named the hive. Or a special place that only ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Sword fighting
Cool. Makes us want to read more: "he asked in a texan accent" texan = Texan "which broke into millions of pieces on impact." I'm sure it didn't really break ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Changed
Hey! I have made some changes to your story! It's cool. I'll correct more tomorrow! It's really good. I don't know what age the MC is yet, but I guess ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Changed
Alright, I am downloading these right now. I'll get back to you as soon as possible! I love vampire stories! BBB
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Darkness #6 part four
Thanks, guys. I'll go and change that stuff.
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: I'm Gonna Laugh
*stands back* Uh...cool! Interesting and dark. I've felt that way before. It surprised me when you cussed though, cuz I've never heard you cuss. Anyway, good bye! *runs off before ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: The Darkness
Hey! This will really grab your reader's attention. I loved it. Prologues can be short. It doesn't matter. There was only one thing: "You will follow my story and my ...
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: NanoWriMo Wordcount '07
...I wish I were at 40k... 25,353! Yay! I finally finished the freaking long chapter six...now I'm on seven! Yes! Everything is going great! Can't wait to write more! BBB
Nov 16, 2007 -
Re: Depredation of Nightmares Chapter 2
Oh awesome! I really liked this one. I can't wait for the next! Your #1 fan! BBB
Nov 16, 2007