BigBadBear

holy cow! Kim, you didn't tell me you liked to paint! This was like the best painting I have ever seen! The horns really caught my attention, and you chose ...

Yeah. Ok, what camp are we at? lol Basic or Camp?

*uh...I really don't know what a military camp is supposed to be like. Could you like give us examples? I thought that we would be all formal and stuff, but ...

Ohh! I really liked that! That could be a really cool song! I liked it! The beginning didn't make much sense, but as the song went on, it was really ...

Hey! This is really good! I couldn't find anything other than what they had already said but this line: How long will you be there or have you already found ...

God's Angle = God's Angel Common spelling error. I do it alot. Ok, let's get to some critquing! The odor grew so strong that I felt like I was going ...

Hey! This is way good! Is this the first chapter in that other one I read...the bookworm one? It has the same charactor. Anyway, this was way good. I loved ...

Hey! Paw, you are a fantastic writer! I haven't read very much of your writing, so I will be now. Every story I have read of yours has been really ...

Oh my gosh. I absolutely loved it! This was amazing! I could totally picture what was going on and stuff. Wow! Pawprint, this was by far the best you have ...

Sounds like the good guy in the book. He has a good personality but can be obnoxious at some times. He doesn't have any girlfriends because he's nerdy. Landon Maxfield

Tanner I really didn't want to be here. How could she have broken up with me right before I went away? Chelsea, the girl of my dreams decided that we ...

Thanks guys. I know that this isn't one of my best poems, but I'll try to do better next time. Thanks for leaving your comments and everything. It'll help me ...

Oh...that's really creepy. He was growling at her! Freaky! Anyway, is lunch really after second period? That is really early for lunch. I loved the whole diolouge and stuff. It ...

I really liked it, because it was sad. The only thing that made it really hard to read were capitals and punctuation. Without it the poem is just like a ...

Hm...sounds like an animal being abandoned, and then raised by Humans. Or a human being raised by wolves...sounds very cliche, sad to say. It isn't something I would pick up, ...