BigBadBear

Kylan, This one was a little too complicated for my taste. I found it extremely hard to link anything together, really. A lot of the stanzas were so different that ...

Pork, This was great. Not only is it great, but it's original. Jeez, you just wrote about 2000 words about a story of two brothers who are standing in line ...

It is Sachiko's 17th birthday today! Happy birthday, dear! I hope you have a wonderful one! :birthday: :birthday: :birthday: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!! -Jared

Kylan, I really, really like your poetry. I think it was you that told me that you don't have to understand poetry to love it. So I've been reading lots ...

I wrote this yesterday, trying to get my feelings out on paper. I think it works well. Maybe a little too short. - Twisted and perverted vines ensnare victims of ...

Kamas, So, you've had some pretty great reviews, and you're lucky to have gotten so many! I don't have a lot to add, other than one of lines doesn't work ...

Galerius, One of the main reasons I don't care for poetry that much is because I can never understand anything. I did talk to some of my poet friends, and ...

Hey, there! I'm Jared. As countless others have said before, you can really write. I don't say this to everyone, and when I do, it should be taken seriously. You ...

Peanut, This is very beautiful, but there is one major drawback. The commas. You can get rid of every single one. Please, get rid of them. They detract from the ...

SNOINK SUCKS. Anyway. I get really violent feelings when I read this poem, and nothing more. I don't really take anything away from this short of piece. There were only ...

Jon, This is really strange. I can't quite grasp what you're trying to convey in this poem. You may think it works, but it really doesn't. The rhyming, man. It's ...

Rosey, I've been away from poetry for so long, it feels weird to get back into the habit of reviewing, but nevertheless, I shall do my best! That rhymed. Sort ...

June, Um. Wow. Since there are like a million pictures here, I won't go through all of them, but I'll point out a few that I think are exceptional, or ...

I fancy the quote found in my signature. -Jared XP

This, sadly, is do-able. I'll get write on it. -Jared