BigBadBear

Hey! I haven't read the stuff before this, but I thought it was really good. It moved at a reasonable pace, and I didn't seen any spelling or stuff. Good ...

Hey! I am going to be doing an advanced edit on this, just so you can see like grammar and spelling mistakes, and such like that. Ok, here I go! ...

Uh...what is this? This is just a title. Aren't you going to post the chapter, or story? BBB

...I read this a long time ago. Didn't I give a review? *blushes* sorry, Kim! Well, this was really good. There was only one thing that I really didn't like ...

"for she is just a new born." New born = newborn. Hey! I liked this. You have written better, but this leaves with a good sense of mystery, which I ...

Well, that was really good. I was kind of picturing this to have a deeper meaning. Like, someone is turning you into something you're not, but that isn't how it ...

Ohh! I love that title! Sounds very mysterious. Most likely a mystery/crime novel. Very interesting. It would probably have a cool title. I would definately want to read it! Beautifully ...

Oh...man, that is really sad. True, but sad. So, I am guessing that this Isaac Wise is a friend of yours? Well, I really liked it, but the last stanza, ...

Thanks so much. I am going to go and edit that right now! BBB

HAHAHAHA! That was really funny. Again, Pawprint, you have done excellent. Your writing is perfect! I didn't see any errors. As for titles: (don't kill me!)

I killed her. You did well, but could have done better. “Shut up!” I shouted to my annoying subconscious, “Shut up!” I looked at Ronda’s body and her bloody shoulder. ...

Hey! Like everyone else, this is really good, and mysterious. I wonder what bit him/her? I wanna read the rest! BBB

(suzanne, I forgot to add my title to the last one I posted! lol!) Huh...Holy Moses sounds like an olden day (B.C.) spoof on Moses. lol, I would read it, ...

Wow. That's really powerful. It really reflects our generation. I REALLY like how you did this: "Look at me, her body says." & "She screams out, look at me!" Because ...

Sounds like a killer pen. Lol! Anyway, if it had a cool cover, I would pick it up, but the title enough would have me saying, "Who would want to ...