BigBadBear

Hey thanks for reviewing Field Trip. This has really made me a better author. By the way, I got this published! If it weren't for you guys, then I would ...

Lol, sorry for killing Samantha. Thanks for helping me guys. This has really made me a better author! BBB

Hey, again, thanks for reviewing my work. It has made me TONS better. Thanks for taking your time to help me! Any more comments would be appreciated! BBB

Hey! This was not how I expected it to end. Ron killing Harry *cries* Well, anyway, I didn't find it too believable. Right here: ""He's under the Imperius Curse!" she ...

Ha. I agree with Fangala because this sounds like Maximum Ride, and I loved it. I'm surprised that you could write like that and not have read it! Well: there ...

Hey thanks. I'll go back and edit this next month. But for the things that you pointed out, Kylan, I'll go and edit right now. Thanks a ton! BBB

Thanks Kim! I'll go back and edit those.

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Wow. That was really cool. There were a couple things that bugged me. First of all, puncutation. I know that most poems don't use it, but I think that this ...

Lol...weight loss program. Funny. Anyway, I re-read it and I thought that it was much better. It made much more sense. Well, there was only one line that I have ...

Awww. That's nice. I liked it. The only thing I think you should change is that you should put a period at the end of each line, not a comma. ...

Wow..thats really good. I only found one mistake where you didn't capitalize an I, but that was all. It's really scary when people commit suicide...anyway, nice poem. It flowed very ...

“She is just as important! She is important to me! I don’t want to lose her in December!” The instant that I said that, I covered my mouth. Uh-oh. Did ...

Um...what is that? 4/10

34,333! I hope that I am sorta ahead of schedule. I hope! Ahh! I'm going to make it...I am going to make it...I'm going to make it.