BigBadBear

Holy cow! 98k???? Well, I'm at 45k!!! Yay me! BBB

Hey! I read a bit of this when you posted it elsewhere and I loved it! I will critique this as much as I can for all that you've done...you ...

Hey, thanks everyone! I didn't know that this was going to be such a good little story. I'll write more after my NaNo...whenever I finish that. I'll go back and ...

Hey! This is just a little thing that I wrote. I mainly focused on Eliza's look because of Jennifina's contest. Thanks for any help you can give me! I might ...

...animal droppings...

Lol. Thanks so much, Cat. It means a lot to me. I am going to go back and edit the post according to your critique! BBB

42k! I can't remember the exact number... I think that this is going to be the hardest 8k of my life!!!!!

Wow. This was beautiful. I don't know what to say... I didn't see any mistakes, which is good. Great job! BBB

Hey! Unlike Cade, I liked this. It had a nice ring to it, all though the Love is...got kinda repetitive. That was the point you were driving for, no? Anyway, ...

Hey, sorry for posting such a long post. This chapter is really long, so I will post longer sections. Sorry! But I know you just love Midnight Darkness...just kidding. And ...

Hey! Well, yeah, I was wondering how you pronounce Deuce. I was having a hard time with that. And as for the Native American names, pick something that the reader ...

Hey! I really liked this, I have to say. I really got bothered because I didn't exactly get 'hooked'. I know that it'll take some time, and I think that ...

Pudding (don't know why. It sounds like a type of pudding)

Hm...I liked it. Really short, but this could be a VERY interesting book. Also, only use three dots right here " ready to fire.............." It should be, "ready to fire..." ...

(Cat is so weird) Anyhow, hey! I am BBB, Jared, or Bigbadbear. Whatever floats your boat. Whats up? What do you like to write? If you have any questions, just ...