BigBadBear

wasn't? I found it that bad?

I really liked this. I don't know what to say. Sometimes, things seem a tad unreal. Like pinching babies...ahah. Anyway, good job. Just look over it and you'll see everything. ...

*bursts out laughing* Ok, I have to tell you: You have created pure brilliance!!! Ahhh! I loved it! You add the perfect amount of humor and everything that you need ...

Whoa... Just telling you >> this is REALLY good! I loved it! The only thing that you need to do different is SPELL the words out, not WRITE them like ...

he frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men grasped

*cracks up laughing* I love it. So funny! 10/10

9/10 I love it. It's so...memorizing! BBB

*smirks/laughs/snorts* that was funny! I have no idea in the WORLD how you can come up with a topic so...strange and yet funny! Great job! I loved the flow and ...

I wanna do it!!! I'll go and critique something right now!!! BBB

Jared Jared flipped to random pages of his spell book and muttered more incantations, and then grew tired. He realized that he had not slept at all last night, and ...

Hey! This was a great poem. I liked it. "As voices long dead rejoice through great song." This part 'fine song' just doesn't fit. You should take fine out completely. ...

Hahah. Thanks. Well, to tell the truth, I am on chapter 12. I just haven't been posting them...*oops!* Well, thanks. I can't wait to read more of your stuff! BBB

Chapter Ten: Shunned Are you freaking kidding me? That was my first thought as I tried to ignore the overwhelming pain in my side. I could feel the hot tears ...

Oh my gosh...I hate you! Why did you have to leave at that spot? You HAD to hold me in suspense huh? Grrrr... Well, I loved it. Everything about except ...

Lol, everytime I look at it, it cracks me up. 9/10