BigBadBear

Great! The only thing I noticed was the 'to' and it's supposed to be 'too'. Other than that, this was great. I could totally see your point and everything, and ...

Holy cow! Fangala, this is amazing. I loved it. "I'm addicted to your orbit and beyond recovery when I stole your heart it was an accident-- it just sort of...happened ...

Username: 40% not very creative... Custom Title: 50% uh...who is that? Avatar: 90% I love it! Country: 40% Ok, it gets repeitive. I don't like it after the word 'great' ...

*stares in awe at the amazement and excitement that he received from this wondrous chapter* Holy cow, dude! This was amazing! Ok, there were a couple things that I will ...

No no no! Grindlewald is a new bad guy. I think that I kinda got him mixed up with the guy that Dumbledore killed. I'm sorry for any confusion. Let's ...

How long had it been? Had it really been three weeks since I was shunned out of Fort Wolfgang? To me it seemed like a mere couple of hours. Walking ...

Whoa. This is awesome! I loved it! Well, the only thing that you need to know is that this is called a prologue, not a prelude. A prelude is a ...

Wow! That was really good! I wanna read more! it was rumored that she ahd taken out This should read, " It was rumored that she had taken out..." That ...

Jared Jared tugged on Felicia's arm. She looked down. "What?" she asked. The compartment fell silent, and Jared whispered, "Don't you remember? Remember when I had that dream of Dad?" ...

Hey, Jacki! Welcome to YWS! I know that you will just love it here! I'm BBB, Bigbadbear, Jared, or whatever floats your boat. We are glad that you have joined ...

Chapter Eleven: The Witches Lacy couldn’t believe the situation she was currently in. She was stuck in a dungeon, probably crawling with mice and…and worse. She shivered and rubbed her ...

Whoa...it's like the circle of life, ha. Great job! Really sad thought. Sad, but true. Things happen like this all the time. Great job BBB

Hey! I loved this! It was really great! Your diologue seemed all right, but not the best. Your grammar was simply beautiful. The only thing that I can find fault ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm glad that you have found out how to post and everything. Ok, make sure that you double space between each paragraph, because it makes it ...

Hahah. I loved it. Just old Fangala writing more of her hilarious comedies! I'm off to read the second part! This is fantastic, and WAY too funny! I love it! ...