BigBadBear

(By the way, Wanda was not at the ball. She is off somewhere else, but I wanna control Cinderella and give her the worst possible outcome; but remember: she does ...

Mary is still hanging around because she loves Christian more than anything else in the world. You see, she would give her life for him, as you see later on ...

Chapter Twelve: I am Landon the Bloodthirsty “Don’t listen to that voice. It lies,” Adri said quietly. I jerked my head up, not realizing that I was still in the ...

Awesome. Author, you are a great writer. It was terribly sad, even know I had no idea what was going on. I love the way that you write. It makes ...

Jared Shivering, he glanced at one of his peers as she struggled to make it up to the sorting hat. Jared had just went through pure torture; rowing a boat ...

Never mind, I'll do the huge critique today. Well, here I go!!! Note: I am not trying to be rude or anything, so if you disagree with something, just PM ...

Hey! Well, I just wanted to say that I have read this and I liked it, all though there are numerous mistakes which I will kindly point out tomorrow. Great ...

(lol chocoholic, I love your character!!!! Sorry, I just wanted to tell you.)

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Wanda; Fairy "Now, go and fall in love with Prince Charming! I am sure that he will be pleased with you!" Wanda cried, pointing Cinderella into the courtyard of her ...

Well, I have only been on here a few months, and I have become addicted! Thank you to all who have read my stories and critiqued them, because this has ...

Wanda; Fairy "Bipity Bobity Boo!" Wanda cried in a forced cry, making it sound like she was having an enjoyable time. Cinderella gasped and said, "Oh! My dress! It's beautiful!" ...

Username: 70% reminds me of Eragon...I didn't like Eragon that much... Custom Title: 99.9% awesome. Avatar: 100% creepy... Country: 100% Signature: 20% sorry...too depressing... Overall: 98%

(sorry for posting so much. It's just that this is SOOOOOOO much fun!) Wanda; Fairy "Hello? Prince Charming?" Wanda cried, her eyes wandering aimlessly around the interior of the castle. ...

Wanda; Fairy "Goodbye, my dear!" Wanda cried as she ushered Lillian out of the door. As soon as she closed the entrance to her 'humble abode' she smirked. What an ...