-
Re: I Hate Snoink
Hahha. I totally switch from third person to first person. -Jared
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: I Hate Snoink
The pinata was a pig head. It had a large snout, where the candy was stuffed up into, and the ears could also have candy coming out of. Two blue ...
Jun 23, 2009 - Re: My hand writing Jun 23, 2009
-
Re: In the Margins
I thought I had it planned. I thought planned it I had. I had planned it I thought. Planned thought it I had. Plan thought I plan. It planned me. ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: For BBB: A discussion of storytelling and conflict in poetry
Snoink, I'm madly in love with you right now. No way in heck did I imagine that you would probably spend two to three hours working on this. Thank you ...
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Blimey! YWS Has Gone British!
These are just views, right? Not actual accounts that were made in those cities? -Jared
Jun 19, 2009 -
Re: Josephsdotter
Kylan, Guess what? You won't believe it. Neither do I, but it's happening. I understand this poem. I know, right? It's crazy. I can't believe it! With that aside... This ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Wicked Wishes
Hey, Jon. Like the person above me, to fully get into detail about this poem, I'll split it up into stanzas and we'll go from there. Coming to see me ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Mayflower [1]
June! I love you. You're freaking awesome. Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou. I love reading good, solid prose like this. This wasn't that hard to read, like a few other stories I have reviewed ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Beowulf Project Part 1
Hey Scribe! About halfway through this piece, I began to pick on something quite unexpected, and quite plesant. But not at the same time. In fact, I really don't know ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
When I try to go to the page 101 Tips for Writers, the page that shows up says "Oops, that page doesn't exist!" Yeah, that page hasn't existed for a ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: of emeralds and rubies
of emeralds and rubies sweet is the site of an everlasting gleam. Unfurling crystalline stars, sparkle sparkle they dance in the pale moon. rainbows of color and tidal waves of ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: The Twins Are Twenty-One!
Wait, wait, wait. They're TWINS????? -Jared
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
This is my friend Emmalee & me in English. Taken on the last day of school. yesterday. Alyssa and I, on the last day. Alyssa and Amy, two hotties. Haha. ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: The Tube of Terror! [2/2]
Pork, He thought briefly that they should've called the ride the Long Intestine, I know, right? Cause you enter through the mouth and come out the anus! His foot hit ...
May 24, 2009
