BigBadBear

Ok, I have just had one of those, "That would be a cool idea for a book!" moments, and so I need help for all of you 1700s fans! I ...

Holy cow! Seriously, that was the best prologue I have even read; considering that I have read many prologues on this site. Let's get through the very un-numerous mistakes that ...

... I remembered posting a comment on here! Oh well! This was good, and as ciago said, VERY SHORT. We don't have very much time to understand what is going ...

Well, I agree with most of this. Poetry is a very cool thing. It can reflect feelings very well and things like that. But sometimes, like you said, poetry doesn't ...

Chapter Thirteen: The Last Hope Man, so many things happened that day, it was unimaginable. Supposedly, I had found an entire camp full of powerful Witches, slaughtered them, and found ...

..... OMG! This was amazing! I love this story! It's so well written and...and...and...well, here is a big critique 'cause you made a few mistakes: Chapter 8 Oh well I ...

Ha! I love this site! It's so much fun! The highest I have ever gotten was like...1k! lol, not that much, but it is sure addictive! I love fact, that's ...

Whoa...it's really...freaky! 8/10

(lol...) Ok, I'll do one that I read from a book "A girl and her mother are at a wedding. The little girl asks the mother, "Why is the bride ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Just a quick reminder >> only post 1 thing a day. People will be more likely to critique your poems and stuff, and it is courtesy. ...

Jared Google eyed, Jared feasted until his jaw hurt of chewing. The food was so delcious and wonderful...he didn't know how he could have survived without ever coming here. This ...

Hey, thanks guys. Butter In My Hair kinda took me down, and I haven't written any more since. Thanks for commenting guys. You've made my day better! BBB

Hmm...that was very interesting. Of course, not much of it made sense. All of the sudden the guy popped out of no where, but you said that this was in ...

Awwh...that was very sweet. Wouldn't everyone like to find a note like that? Anyway, I'll do another big critique: (remember to double space between each paragraph!) I finally calmed down, ...

Kim! I was so happy that I found out that you had written more and posted it! Oh, man, this chapter was FANTASTIC! I often wonder how you can write ...