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Re: Title Feedback
Sounds like a fantasy thing. Wouldn't really pick it up unless the cover was amazing. The Mason Hunt
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Fifteen Eternal Candles (Chapter 1, Scene 1)
Inside a dark small room decorated lined with armories; two figures moved about slow and a semicolon is not the proper punctuation to use. A comma will be fine here. ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
Whoa...sounds like a freaky ghost story. I would definately read it. The Mason Hunt
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: Blue Creek
Jared Luke "Jen, come on," Jared urged his sister quietly. He absentmindedly touched his spiky hair and sighed. His sister always took forever to do her stupid make up. He ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: Blue Creek
Awesome. Name: Jared Luke Sex: Male Age: 15 Appearance: Blond, tall and stunning green eyes. Hair is spiked up. Occupation: Student at school (don't know what school is called) and ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: Honor #2
Hey! Well, I am like loving this story to pieces, and so I might as well point out some stuff: Booker swore. He was getting a headache. The sooner this ...
Dec 22, 2007 -
Re: Half-Blood (a.k.a. A Dragon's Story) Chapter 1
Hey! Well, I've got this to say so far: Your prologue was highly interesting. It was well crafted and really lures the reader in. I think that it is interesting ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Hello
Hey! I am BBB, Bigbadbear, or Jared. Whatever floats your boat. You asked the question, "When I want to post one of my story's, do I put them in the ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: You know, I can't think of a title--
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I know that you'll love it here. Everyone does. So, tell us a little about your writing. What do you like to write? What do you ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Masons
Thank you so much! LDS = Latter Day Saints. Mormons, in other words. I have been longing to ask this question: Did the Masons have any enemies? Because in my ...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for using quotes out of the best book in the world.
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
I saw this a while ago... Yeah, my parents wouldn't let me post my face so it was blacked out. But you get the basic picture! So, yeah that's me. ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Snoink is a 40 year old man...
...this was very...strange. I believed that you were an old man; and mind you, that wasn't very good, lol. I kinda got creeped out. I thought that this was going ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: hi! i'm new...
Yes! Hello, I'm BBB, Bigbadbear, or Jared. Whatever floats your boat. The trilogy Maximum Ride has really changed my style of writing, and I am sure that it will do ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Has anyone actually...?
I would be happy to give you some experiences. Yes, I have tried numerous times to get published. I get so excited that I found a reliable looking company, and ...
Dec 18, 2007
