BigBadBear

Well, I have changed the plot, and so this is going to more of a Historical Fiction than a Fantasy. So I am going to ask a mod to move ...

lol...I don't know. The two just don't quite go together. I would pick it up anyways. It looks cool/funny/weird? Frequency

Well, whatever. I really liked #3. I would read it if it were a if you post it here, please PM me! BBB

I have just had one of the moments where you come up with a great idea for a book. I have a few things written down, and I would like ...

Awww...you are so nice. Thanks! So, can we submit more than one link? Well, anyway, here is my first section of Field Trip Thanks so much, Kitty! BBB

NOTE: this is the last chapter of Midnight Darkness. And...um...I haven't written it all yet. I feel really guilty, and I will start writing again on the 1/1/08. Okie dokie? ...

Merry Christmas, Cat! Well, I am halfway done with reading this and I have noticed that you are sort of...lacking in inserting commas. I'll show a few examples: “Hey everybody!” ...

Hey! I just wanted to tell you that this is really good. Your rhyming fits in really good and there is nothing really to change. I hope that you continue ...

lol this is good. Only one typo: “Here, Pil.” Pil should be Phil.. Well, this was a really good start. You characters have good humor and things like that, so ...

....*pees pants* My goodness! Freaky! 100000/10

*points up* Kit got it all. Darn her... Ok, well this was really good. I couldn't really understand what it was talking about though...first you were talking about Santa, then ...

Crap! I couldn't see anything wrong with this...darn you! come on...not even one mistake...crap! Well, this was really good. You are a good that a word? anyway, you can write ...

I'll Be Gone Well , you made me like a fool and I bet that you felt it

Well, I am going to crit this to death. So... I thought myself of being pretty, and in all truths I was. Insert 'of being' to make it flow smoother. ...

Jared Luke Well, it turned out that Jared and Jennifer couldn't even see what was going on around the flagpole. Police barricaded the perimeter, and when they pulled up to ...