BigBadBear

I really didn't know what to expect when I read this but now I am super dooper glad that I did. This was so funny. This was my favorite line: ...

Hahah! I don't know how you can come up with these kinds of things. So funny! The wheat is scorched the rye is dry all flavor evaporates into the sky. ...

XD Every time that you talk to me I have to laugh. You are so funny. Maximum Ride, huh? My favorite series...we need to make a discussion about it! XD ...

XD There is already a topic of NaNoWriYe. Anyhow, yeah, I'm participating. It really sounds like a lot huh? Well, it's not like NaNoWriMo because you won't feel rushed. For ...

That was good. :) I really don't know what to say. I'm not very good at critiquing lyrics. Well, grammaratically (is that a word?) there was one line that wasn't ...

Um... Well that was interesting. Not really what I was expecting, but it was cool. Lol, so I get the image that this dog is sick and they are trying ...

*squeals!* Yes, you posted! Ok, now I'll hunt for stuff: “Commander!” He shouted, “The culprit’s missing!” He doesn't need to be capitalized. The private yawned again. “Nope. Not since las

Well, I've never read a story quite like this one. It is totally original, and fun. The dialogue was complete natural, so great job on that. There was only one ...

Whoa...*shivers* That was really good! You really created a mysterious feeling come over us, which is a good thing. *shivers again* Creepy... Well, this was very well written. I like ...

Well, hey! That's quite a lot about you! You seem like a very cool person, which you are. I have read some of your stuff and it's very good, let ...

Yes! About time that you posted! Ok, now let's get to the critique: "...Prinsoaldreahi," came a voice with more force If this is a word in another tongue, then this ...

*Frequency is fantasy. lol* Hm...very fantasy. Being myself, I have forced myself to write it, being not very interested in it. Oh, I would pick it up, but I wouldn't ...

*applauds* this was such a fun story book, and I am proud to see the way that John died. It was fitting for him. Sorry for killing Tannar! BBB

Holy cow...talk about triple posting. anyway, I don't understand any of it, so 4/10

Koko - Thanks. There are two boys: Lyre and Arnold. I'll go back and try and see what I can do that make that less confusing. Star - Thanks for ...