BigBadBear

Ok, I went back and edited my name. Sorry! To continue the questions: what's the longest thing you've ever written? My NaNo, Midnight Darkness. It is currently 267 pages and ...

*oh... sorry. I have totally forgotten about this. Well, it's still the first day. I'll join back up* [Jared] Jared awoke to the sound of Thomas snoring. He grunted and ...

Are you serious? You're amazing. No, dying is when you aren't living anymore AND when you dye something another color. Oh, yeah, and before I forget: this story isn't rated ...

Hey, there Mark! Ok, one quick thing before I get to the crit: be sure to put a space between each paragraph. This way it is much, much easier to ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS and all that jazz. I'm BBB, bigbadbear, or Jared. Whatever floats your boat! You're novel sounds awesome. I can't wait to go and take a look ...

Holy moly, Gladius. Take all of the fun! Grr... well, this way good. (as always) I think that you dwelt on the bad thing from the gifts in the perfect ...

Wow. I'm not kidding. Wow. This is one of the best poems that is on the site. No joke. Alice, this is amazing... There was only one teeny thing I ...

You're kidding me, right? Wicked, as in the musical Wicked? I've found another fan! Ahhh! *regaining cool composture* Hi. I'm BBB, Jared or bigbadbear. Whatever floats your boat. If you ...

This is a joke? O.O

I haven't looked at the other critiques yet so sorry for repeating anything. Like they did every day , his thoughts drifted back to her. Comma between day and his. ...

Um... nice little speech. Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm Jared, BBB or bigbadbear. Whatever floats your boat. Yes. Together we can make a difference, so if you need an answer ...

Hola! What's up? I'm BBB, Jared or bigbadbear. Whatever floats your boat. Let me get this right: your 14 and you are in Highschool. I'm fourteen and I'm in the ...

Jabber, Jabber, Jabber. I feel so bad. If you would make a mistake once in a while, I could actually critique something. But, while I'm here... This is an improvement ...

Grooooosss! Yep. That's pretty much all I have to say. BBB

Oooh!!! Fun! Ranch or vinaigrette? Ranch, of course! Rubber ducks or sock monkeys? Rubber duckies! Fire or ice? ICE! Magic lamp or wishing well? Magic lamp. Whenever I throw a ...