BigBadBear

Known for writing amazing Wolf/Animal stories! Go Ayra!

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Wow. Yeah. That's what I said when I finished this. Wow. This was so cool! You really made us feel for the narrator, and it was all in all wonderful. ...

Heylo, again! Sorry it took so long to get on! I was expecting this crit to take a while, but no. Esme caught everything... So... This chapter confused me like ...

(I'm a bit conceited if you haven't already noticed...) No you're not! You sound awesome! Lots and lots and lots of awards, eh? *sigh* Good job! I wish I could ...

... I really haven't seen anything with him in it, and it's a shame he died. My mom said that he was the Joker in the new Batman. But considering ...

*sorry, I couldn't get to this earlier!* Boring? Not a cliffhanger? Whadda smoking, kid? Ok, yeah, I'll have to admit that this wasn't my favorite. I didn't know what was ...

8/10 Funny, but not that funny.

Awwwwhhh! Is she new? She's so cute!!! Her eyes are scaring me...

*sigh* You guys all sound so professional. I've never written anything more than a first draft. Ok, I write it, and I'm happy with it. It's crap though. So, I ...

Hey, Ana! What's up? I'm BBB, bigbadbear, or Jared. Whatever floats your boat. Like Silly said up there *points up* I'm here to help you. So, if you have any ...

Awesome! But, make sure that you only post one chapter a day. It's a rule. Ok, on to the crit! They pounced [s]at[/s] on him [s]but[/s] before he could move, ...

Awesome! I love this story. It's freaking awesome. Now, on to the crit: After a heave , Aedomir stood on the rocky ground, leaning against the boulder. Comma after heave. ...

Awesome! People are posting! Ok, let's answer some questions: From Arya: My question: Do you prefer beaches by moonlight, sunset, dawn or afternoon? Moonlight, all the way. I went to ...

Shucks. I couldn't find a single stupid thing wrong with this. Grammar wise. Grr... your writing is so incredible to read. It's fun and super awesome. Your descriptions are so ...