BigBadBear

Hey! Thanks for all of your comments. Jabber, I edited all of those mistakes that you found. So thanks. I am having a little bit of a breakdown though. This ...

Hey, Alzz! This was a good start. This could really turn into something. No grammar errors, just the whole plot basically. Spend more time with each different section. For the ...

This is a new novel that I have started. So far, I love it. It's so much fun to write fantasy! Well, I hope you like it! StoweAway Part One: ...

Hey, Slinds! I'm back! One question: Why are the dialouge paragraphs not broken up? The rest of your story wasn't... it just seemed odd. Anyway, this was a little better ...

Hey Slinds! Well, to be honest, this wasn't very interesting. Don't take it the wrong way; it was good. It's just that for the whole middle of your chapter, every ...

Again, way to go! This story is rockin me sockins off! Anywho: The mayor’s house looks like my best bet. I’d guess an officially elected leader to be the most ...

XD Wow. Uh, wow. I really don't know what to say. I was going to make a big long crit, full of grammar errors but (surprise!) I didn't see any. ...

Hey! Looks like you got no real crits here, and so I'm here now! Yippie! I love this story! So awesome. Now shush and let me read it! *reads* *is ...

Awesome! Chapter Two! I can't wait to read it! Awwhhh... another sad chapter. Choco, I've got to tell you that this is good. I am really feeling for Jose. She ...

Hey! Thanks for submitting this chapter! I found it really interesting. It was. It kept my interest all the way through until the end. I really liked it. Like the ...

Thanks guys! I'll spend all day tomorrow critting my heart out. Thanks for all of your pieces! I read/critted quite a few and they are really nice. thanks a ton! ...

Hey! I'm here, just like I said I would be! And there's no need to be shy! Ask for all the crits you want! And I'm sure that I'll read ...

Ahh! I feel so loved! Thanks for giving me all of these, guys. And zankoku, you can submit all you want. I would recommend it! Now I actually have something ...

Awesome! I can't wait to get reading. After the first part of "Diary of a Villian" I know that this will be awesome. Ok, now for the crit: Had someone ...

Hey! I will be doing a crit for every part, so expect some crits soon! (Note that I haven’t read over the other crits, so sorry if I repeat anything!) ...