BigBadBear

Man, I'm gullible. -Jared

Hey DreamBeliever! My name is Jared, and I'll be your reviewer today. Just a warning: I see you're new to the site. Why don't you make a post in the ...

defendthelegend, This, in its shortness, is actually quite stirring and good. I have but a few comments on this poem: Temptation forces >> 'forces' isn't a very powerful image. I ...

Hey. Looks like you have a ton of reviews already, so sorry if I repeat anything. I don't want to read every single critique. This is an extremely well written ...

Stella, And when got to the Seven Tunnels- that was where the, the creature had come from, which one would I choose? Uh... "that was where the, the creature"? What? ...

Poetic conceit is an extended metaphor with a complex logic that governs an entire poem or poetic passage. By juxtaposing, usurping and manipulating images and ideas in surprising ways, a ...

Sapphirejay, This is a pretty good piece of poetry you have here! There are a lot of conflicts in this poem, which is a really good thing. I like a ...

Hey, Choas. A good way to get reviews is to go Will Review For Food Thread and post the link of the stories you want to be critiqued in one ...

Awesome! Thanks! -Jared

Hello! It's so nice to meet you. I'm BigBadBear, but you can call me Jared. Welcome to YWS! At first, this site seems HUGE, right? I know. When I first ...

Haha. I beat all yours. Wow! That is amazing! I really like the idea that you have, and you have creative names and things. You are really creative, and I ...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Well. guh. Bye, Cat-sama. -Jared

You're only the prettiest 16 year old ever!!!!! Happy birthday! -Jared

Kylan, I've been meaning to critique this for a while. Well, ever since I saw that you posted it. Mainly because I'm kindaalittleokmaybealot in love with your poetry. So, yesterday, ...

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