BigBadBear

[Nate] "Hey, Nate!" I heard someone whisper sharply. I froze. Had the whitecoats found me? I shouldn't be running in the halls anyway! Oh, freak! I'm dead! "Nate, it's me, ...

[Nate] "Lyssa!" I whispered and crawled over to her cage. Arro watched enviouly. "Lyssa, I saw Max! She's been taken captive by Erasers, or something! We have to get you ...

Nate: "Heh," I smiled. Then I shook my head. "I'd show you, but I'd only be able to do it one time a day... it really sucks." "What can you ...

Nate: "I'm Nate," I greeted. "How are you doing today?" Arro looked around her small cage and said, "How does it look like?" I smiled softly. "I'm sorry about all ...

Hey, thanks for all of the critiques! About the italics: I took them away and replaced them with Capitals. So, now instead of, " He snarled.", it will be, "He ...

Hey! I'm baaaack! awesome chapter. I like the journal, although it was really hard to understand what was going on. But I think, because you're an awesome author, you will ...

Hey! I'm baaack! (bet you're gettting tired of me saying that, huh?) This was an ok chapter. The cop wasn't exactly the most well developed character. He was just... blah. ...

Hey! I'm back again! Well, this was by far the best chapter! I love the whole phone thing and (surprisingly) it was easy to follow! You have some awesome ideas, ...

Hey! I'm baaaack! What's up? Awesome. I loved it, although I really found it hard to believe that he jumped up a hundred feet... until I read that he the ...

Hey, Wozzel! What's up? I've heard you talking about this someplace else, and you always give me crits, so now I'm here to return the favor! Well, you've intrigued me! ...

:shock: Snoink! :shock: .... Whoa... that was... uh... I don't know what to say... that was... very.. perturbing! How about that? Well, one more thing: Eeeeeew! BBB heheh

Awesome! I think that we are ready to start! _ Nate: "They've found her," I heard a whitecoat say. "They found Max." There was a sense of triumph in his ...

Well, Jabber convinced me to write this dream I had a couple nights back. It wasn't nearly as frightning as this, because most of my dreams are random and mean ...

Hey! I'm baaaaack! My heart ached as my love drifted away; he no longer cares for me, but I do for him so dearly . Great first sentence, although you ...

Hey, Phebe! What's up? Your blood is my drink; Your eyes are my future; Your body is my fortresse; And your mind is my soul. Very nice. The flow was ...