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Re: Adrift
[Brendon Jones] Brendon sighed and said, "Yeah. That's what I hoped I would do." Suddenly remembering, the man stuck out his hand. "My name is Jackson. David Jackson." Brendon quitely ...
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Bag of Green Grapes
OH! I get it now! Hahahahah! -Jared
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Adrift
Another 3B storybook? Plot: You are taking a cruise. It is lovely! Everything is going as planned. You snorkel, swim and eat all you can eat. You sleep in small ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Survival of the Extinct Chapter 1
Hey! This was a good start! But still... raptors? C'mon! T-Rex's are soooooo much cooler! Anyway, my personal life to the side: It was very intriguing. I like the whole ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: A First Attempt
Hya Jabs! What's up? Diving into poetry is really scary. Especially with Brad lurking around... ;) To write a poem , oh-so grand. May I suggest a comma tonight? This ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Bag of Green Grapes
Um... I don't get it... -Jared
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: Rawr! I'm a Donosaur!
Hahaha! Strangely enough, that's how I pictured Donosaur too... -Jared
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread
I'm baaaaack! [/fails at life] I can't do it. So I'm back. For good! -Jared
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: Reaper's Song #1
Hya Wozzel! What's up? Daniel gave me a puzzled stare. “Why would you look under my bed for something in my closet?” HAhahah! It was then that I knew that ...
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: The Party Killers [novel]
Told you I'd be the first to crit! And shhh! I'm not supposed to be on YWS for another week! ]Her red curls fell in her face, trying to protect ...
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread
I've been on here for such a long time, I've decided to take a 1-2 maybe even 3 week break from YWS. That sounds horrendoulsy long, but I plan to ...
Mar 2, 2008 -
Re: Harborville
*I'm going to be gone for a while (read my blog) so, you can do whatever with Ryan!*
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Finding Atlantis (Ch 1) --Rewrite!
Hya, Jabber! I loved the prologue, and I just had to come and read chapter 1! ------- Just a suggestion >> use contractions. They make everything a little easier to ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Harborville
[Ryan Peterson]' Shaking his head, Ryan muttered, "Nah. I've never even left my hometown." The man stuck out his hand, "My name's Ryder." Hesitating, Ryan took his hand, "I'm Ryan. ...
Mar 1, 2008 -
Re: Harborville
*taps foot impatiently for someone else to post*
Mar 1, 2008
