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Re: The Writers Block Monster
Haha. A writer's block poem... hehe Edits are in bold There is a little monster that creeps into your mind. It sits upon a block that reads, “I take my ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Prodigies
- Sol Olsen - "Ah," Sol cried as he turned a corner. He had collied with someone, and his small body collapsed to the ground. His many books scattered around ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Diary, EDITED
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Jared, I'll be you're critiquer for today. Well, I'll give you a couple things that you did excellently and some things that you really have ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Prodigies
-- Sol Olsen -- Gregory thumped him on his head, making Sol whimper. "Freaking idiot," Gregory sneered and snatched Sol's English paper out of his hand. "Pl - ple - ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
Hey there! Well, this was an okay poem. There are a couple of things that you lack, though. This is basically a prose written in a poem format. No. You ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Albus.
Hey! I loved the Harry Potter series, so let's begin! He wondered if the Sorting Hat would take his opinion into account. 'Not Slytherin, not Slytherin,' he told himself. WWWWWAAAAYYY ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Prodigies
*I'm not quite sure where this is going. I really don't. I want to post and be active, but I'm not sure how to start Sol just yet... maybe it ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Prodigies
This sounds incredibly challenging, and I'm up for it. Name: Sol Olsen Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance; Short, stubby and has rich blonde hair. Soft green eyes make up for ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Survival of the Extinct Chapter 2
Hya! Why has no one reviewed this? It's such a nice story... O.o We usually ran careful, fast, and vicious but today she was running carefree and excited. That whole ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: EverWayward #12
Nope. I just looked it up on and it says that 'towards' isn't a word. See? -Jared I critiqued this on POP, remember?
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: YWS Review Weekend--Makin' "Yo Story" Jokes Since
Cool. Sounds like fun. 10 reviews ain't that bad. -Jared
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Featured Member for 3/7/2008 Thru 3/20/2008
Wow! That's a looot! Congrats, Razor! -Fanboy
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
You are soooo freaking pretty, Timea!!! *glugs* -Jared
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: What!?!
XD Rick. I know. It seemed like it took forever. -Jared
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: The Party Killers [novel]
Awesome!!! *goes to read* Have you got a tissue?” Maude made a noise that sounded like a cat throwing up a hair ball. “I feel sick.” She wiped her noise ...
Mar 6, 2008
