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The three of them live very different life styles. Try to incorperate some growth in Kelly. Jona opens up to the others. Leera becomes more sophisticated(though you want to keep ...

Thank you all for the suggestions. :) I'm thinking that the three main characters introduce Al to there own way of life. Indeed, they probably will (though that's not the ...

That's right, I've got an idea where I have characters with motivations, and a workable premise...but for the life of me I can't think of a plot. Part of me ...

Whew, glad to hear that my magic system isn't totally tacky or weird...yeah, I know about Avatar, but I was thinking less martial arts than dancing. I was just worried ...

I was wondering about (mostly the originality of) a magic system I've been thinking of, kinda-sorta-not-really for a fantasy work I may or may not write... I wanted to make ...

What I do is basically think about what I would do in the situation. Okay, I'm sorry, that's not very helpful--if you follow this ad verbatim all your characters will ...

What an inopportune time for you to respond, because I've shelved this idea for now. ~_^ In favor of The Zenith Cycle. Which means I should probably create one of ...

Aww, I understand completely. It's the same reason why I puttered out on the Zenith Cycle, I think...you know what you WANT to write, but you just can't execute it. ...

Tentatively called "A Recording of the Mysterious Occurences Surrounding Thomas Dinker", or an equivalent title just as long and officious-sounding. I'm terrible at titling, so consider this tentative

...um, does it have to be vampires? Can it be something a little less overdone than vampires, like...say, Yetis? Or aliens? Or underground cave people who've lived beneath the earth ...

Glad you found my comments helpful; I always try to be as big a help as I can. :) Well, the key to making Ceil not a Mary Sue has ...

When I write in Word, I use standard size-12 Times New Roman. In WordPad, I use Arial size...ten? Or is it eight? Dang, I forget. :( Either way, they're both ...

The story seems interesting, but at the same time...a bit uncompelling. The plot's a fairly generic one, but I can definitely see you making it work. The main issue I ...