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Re: Is this fantasy world cliche?
I like the sound of the different ways to perform magic, though I sure hope those names are only temporarily. "Bender" has aready been used in a fantasy setting, you ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Bickazer's Corner
I've finally updated Broken Memory, and I find I'm able to work on it again. Go read, though. Reviews always give me impetus to continue.
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: Bickazer's Corner
Book 2 of The Linked Worlds has been completed and edited twice. Whoo! Only 6 more chapters (approx. 30,000 words) to go! As for Broken Memory ...eh, heh. I've kind ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Bickazer's Corner
Figured it was about time I did this. Basically, this'll be updated with news on my two main projects: The Linked Worlds and Broken Memory . The Linked Worlds is ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: progress report napalmerski
Wow...you're amazingly prolific. I'm in awe. Best of luck getting published. ^^
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Minorities
It's as I said before. Don't make a cast that's majority white. White =/= default.
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Minorities
Sorry for the double post, but apparently I was braindead last night and I neglected to mention something very important. Namely, this: 1. How do you mention that a character ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Minorities
As someone dearly fascinated by such issues (especially the intersection of pop culture and real life issues--nothing is truly escapist), this kind of discussion intrigues me. Alas, I haven't had ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: The Unchosen Ones
Wahahahaha, I've just completed the scene speadsheet for The Lawful Scepter. I was rather murky on the middle portions of the story, since for a lot of it, in the ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: 3rd person vs 1st person
I'm trying not to give my obligatory rant about how third person can be every bit as deep as first person. :P Pick whichever. The only difference is the pronouns. ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: The Unchosen Ones
There is a magical fantasyland. The magical fantasyland is in danger. It needs heroes. Luckily, there is a prophecy, declaring that together, a prince and a priest will destroy the ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Changing Protagonists
Like many of you, I write novels set in the same universe. I wouldn't technically call them a series; there are five books and they follow one another in a ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Character Emotions
Amon and Rosey have mostly got it. ^^ I'd just like to add that one way to really show character emotions is to describe scenes just as the character would. ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Passive vs. Active
As for when to use passive over active, that's really up to you. I've been critizied a bit for using passive voice (by none other than Bicakzer) but it can ...
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: Passive vs. Active
I don't think using "was" to describe something is technically passive voice (feel free to correct me if I'm wrong, anyone). It's when you use a "was [verb]ing" construction a ...
Sep 4, 2009
