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Yeah, the first chap will be in the present. But the entire epic--six books' worth--will cover...approximately twenty-six years, I think. Ergh, it's been so long since I've worked on the ...

Yeah, well...I did mean for the prologue to be kind of vague and have a mysterious air to it--as it actually takes place around eleven years before the actual events ...

Ash woke with a sense that something momentous was going to happen that day. Er...not a very promising beginning. First of all, having a main character named "Ash" is just...well, ...

Louis Orson and Alexander Jonathan Finley IV speaking (LO as of the first novel, AJF as of the second novel): Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? ...

This happens to be the first part of the prologue of a long and epic project I began working on some time ago. I intend for this to span six ...

Welcome to YWS! The trick is to make a bunch of friends on the site, have them critique the first part of your story, and then they'll pester you until ...

Jak Conwee gritted his teeth as another shell fell above the bunker, blinking manically to get the thick dust out of his eyes. For three and a half days, the ...

I always have these fabulous beginnings to stories..and then I realize that they have no plot and they never make it up here, haha. That is my problem to a ...

Here's my first review...I'm not sure if I'm doing this right but I will try-- “Riley stop worrying,” exclaimed Sam. You need to put a comma between the "Riley" and ...

Dexter in the Dark , mostly because it took a beautifully-executed character (Dexter) and MURDERED him. No pun intended, but...really. I think the worst kind of book isn't one that's ...

Well...I, like probably everyone else here, am an aspiring young writer. My main writing forum is the Deus Ex Machina forums, but I've come here because it seems more active ...