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  • Research Archives Re: What does a totalitarian country consists of?

    Err, wow, that's a bit extreme a move. But whatever. I get my share of political arguments at political blogs, so I'd rather not carry that here. Okay, I'll admit ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Flight Into Fancy

    Hello, Fiction, looks like I'll be your first reviewer. I'm very nitpicky and I go very in depth and I will tear apart your writing at the sentence level. I ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Research Archives Re: What does a totalitarian country consists of?

    But how would researching socialism, which is not a totalitarian system (or indeed a form of government in the first place), help a poster who wants to know what a ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Research Archives Re: What does a totalitarian country consists of?

    Also, I would explore communism and socialism as means by which to express the traits you've mentioned. I'm not an expert, but I'm pretty sure that socialism, by definition, is ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Free Reviews (until September)

    It's summer. I'm bored. Let me review. I will only look at fantasy or science fiction offerings for now. Sorry, but I have to limit the pool in order to ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Name the Character Above You

    Kenneth or Damon. Last name Huntington or Freeman. Male, an ancient devil/demon representing death (as in the fourth horseman of the apocalypse). Looks down on humans and can't be assed ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Balance: Lydia Rain

    Hello, BerlynnRae. I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth; sometimes I end up writing paragraphs for a single sentence. So yeah, ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: In the Footsteps of a Champion

    Hello, brassnbridle, I will be your reviewer today. I tend to go very in depth and I can write paragraphs about a single sentence. Hope that doesn't put you off. ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Reprisal - Prologue + Chapter One

    Okay, so, here's your review as requested. Warning--I go very in depth and I can spend paragraphs dissecting a single sentence. Also, please forgive any oddness in spacing; I had ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Unity Chapter 1 Part 1

    Thanks for all the reviews, everyone. I'm a little busy to reply individually right now but I promise I'll get round to it eventually. And PM me if you need ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Unity Chapter 1 Part 1

    I will return reviews for this. Unity Chapter One: On The Train As Vera Noble stepped onto the train platform, she realized that she’d barely spoken to her mother all ...

    Aug 2, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Shadowstone (Working Title) - Chapter One [Draft 4]

    You both mentioned this so probably best to respond to that part first. First I'll put my reason for putting it in. Basically when I was first putting this story ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Shadowstone (Working Title) - Chapter One [Draft 4]

    Okay, I'll admit that I didn't read it. And I'm still going to review. Now why would I do that? It's obviously not polite. Thing is, I think very few ...

    Aug 1, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Of course the stranger! Is there any question?" ~Vera "This is a very poorly put together moral quandary. Most people wouldn't go that far for such a tiny sum. I ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "I hope I don't." ~Vera "Anyone who knows magic shouldn't have any scars. Basic healing magic prevents most wounds from scarring." ~Zed "...that is none of your business." ~Nirav "Hell ...

    Jul 28, 2010


When a person tells you you hurt them, you don't get to decide you didn't.
— Louis C. K.