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Re: What does a totalitarian country consists of?
Err, wow, that's a bit extreme a move. But whatever. I get my share of political arguments at political blogs, so I'd rather not carry that here. Okay, I'll admit ...
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Re: Flight Into Fancy
Hello, Fiction, looks like I'll be your first reviewer. I'm very nitpicky and I go very in depth and I will tear apart your writing at the sentence level. I ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: What does a totalitarian country consists of?
But how would researching socialism, which is not a totalitarian system (or indeed a form of government in the first place), help a poster who wants to know what a ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: What does a totalitarian country consists of?
Also, I would explore communism and socialism as means by which to express the traits you've mentioned. I'm not an expert, but I'm pretty sure that socialism, by definition, is ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Free Reviews (until September)
It's summer. I'm bored. Let me review. I will only look at fantasy or science fiction offerings for now. Sorry, but I have to limit the pool in order to ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
Kenneth or Damon. Last name Huntington or Freeman. Male, an ancient devil/demon representing death (as in the fourth horseman of the apocalypse). Looks down on humans and can't be assed ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: The Balance: Lydia Rain
Hello, BerlynnRae. I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth; sometimes I end up writing paragraphs for a single sentence. So yeah, ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: In the Footsteps of a Champion
Hello, brassnbridle, I will be your reviewer today. I tend to go very in depth and I can write paragraphs about a single sentence. Hope that doesn't put you off. ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Reprisal - Prologue + Chapter One
Okay, so, here's your review as requested. Warning--I go very in depth and I can spend paragraphs dissecting a single sentence. Also, please forgive any oddness in spacing; I had ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Unity Chapter 1 Part 1
Thanks for all the reviews, everyone. I'm a little busy to reply individually right now but I promise I'll get round to it eventually. And PM me if you need ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Unity Chapter 1 Part 1
I will return reviews for this. Unity Chapter One: On The Train As Vera Noble stepped onto the train platform, she realized that she’d barely spoken to her mother all ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Shadowstone (Working Title) - Chapter One [Draft 4]
You both mentioned this so probably best to respond to that part first. First I'll put my reason for putting it in. Basically when I was first putting this story ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Shadowstone (Working Title) - Chapter One [Draft 4]
Okay, I'll admit that I didn't read it. And I'm still going to review. Now why would I do that? It's obviously not polite. Thing is, I think very few ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Of course the stranger! Is there any question?" ~Vera "This is a very poorly put together moral quandary. Most people wouldn't go that far for such a tiny sum. I ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I hope I don't." ~Vera "Anyone who knows magic shouldn't have any scars. Basic healing magic prevents most wounds from scarring." ~Zed "...that is none of your business." ~Nirav "Hell ...
Jul 28, 2010
