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What I do is basically think about what I would do in the situation. Okay, I'm sorry, that's not very helpful--if you follow this ad verbatim all your characters will ...

A popular, active cheerleader--basically good-natured but ditzy and airheaded. Jill Edwards

personally like to focus on the "Big Picture" and the "Idea". Perhaps Zan prefers characterization and enjoys watching characters interact. I enjoy watching characters interact as well, but only if ...

Hey, my name's Orson, and I'm probably a thousand times smarter than you. Just thought I'd like to get that out of the way. Now, any questions?

This time around, it's not everyone. Because there's too many. "Well, I wouldn't do anything particularly...mushy...I mean...I'm not really...that kind of guy. No, no, this isn't going the way I--damn

Doesn't matter if it's late--I welcome all reviews. :D (though I'd like to start getting critiques from a more diverse set of offense but seems like the same two people ...

What an inopportune time for you to respond, because I've shelved this idea for now. ~_^ In favor of The Zenith Cycle. Which means I should probably create one of ...

5/10 It's not my cup of tea first of all, and second some aspects just sound cheesy. Like the "plant monsters"...uh...O_o The "new radiation" idea sounds corny too. I hope ...

This is well-written, and I didn't notice any major grammar/spelling errors, but... You're right; this is basically an info-dump. While I understand it's necessary to introduce these characters, is it

Thanks for the critique. :) (note I have no idea if you did this after reading my PM or before, so...if you haven't, the end part of the PM will ...

Er, first of all--you are aware there's a rule on this site that you need to critique two works before you post your own work? If you do that, there's ...

3) What do you mean the whole Plush concept doesn't work? Maybe I should have mention that these are magical plush dolls that can walk and make noise in some ...

Well. Um...first of all... I honestly do not mean to be harsh, but to be frank, I don't think this would work very well as a novel. Really, I don't ...

I use TNR now, but started getting sick of it a while ago and began experimenting with fonts. I've gone back to TNR now, though. Though I (used to) do ...

Whaat? I'm sure there's more to tear apart than that. >_> Well...this first chapter is actually my favorite one so far. The other ones I've written so far (the second ...