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Well...I have two things I'd like to have looked at, but they both occupy different priorities...one is less immediate/urgent and the other is for a contest with an 8/15 deadline. ...

I'd critique this, but everyone else has already made their points and I agree completely (particularly when it comes to names...) That being said, I have one thing to say ...

"There are certain people my parents foist on me, mistakenly believing that they will be my friends because they are my age and also patricians. That's unfortunately untrue, as I ...

A dull accountant who kinda-sorta-vaguely wishes for more romance in his life but this is an extremely distant wish, and he himself is unaware of it and just plods through ...

Yes, this is a very preliminary version of the prologue for the story I was discussing in the Writers' Corner. It has yet to be named, or even have a ...

Here I go. it was morning. I'd say "it" should be capitalized but more than that, I think this first sentence should be scrapped completely. You never, NEVER want to ...

Thank you all for the suggestions. :) I'm thinking that the three main characters introduce Al to there own way of life. Indeed, they probably will (though that's not the ...

Very happy to be oblige. :) Can you please take a look at my story "Victim Number Eight"? I'd say it's a romance but...it's rather dark.

...because they both smell, distinctly, and not in a good way. True love is like South Africa...

That's right, I've got an idea where I have characters with motivations, and a workable premise...but for the life of me I can't think of a plot. Part of me ...

Whew, glad to hear that my magic system isn't totally tacky or weird...yeah, I know about Avatar, but I was thinking less martial arts than dancing. I was just worried ...

Hey Ophelia! O_o I recognize you from Uru...I mean, Deus Es Machina! That's rather shocking, but in a good way. :) (well, unless you're not that Ophelia.Stornoway, but I can't ...

I was wondering about (mostly the originality of) a magic system I've been thinking of, kinda-sorta-not-really for a fantasy work I may or may not write... I wanted to make ...

...because they'll eat anything. Chocolate is like a dead baby...

Okay, here I go~! Sister Margeret brought out an old looking book from beneath her cloak and handed it over to Sister Innet. You don't need the "old looking" there...just ...