Bickazer

Okay, sorry for the double post, but I've been thinking about this idea a LOT and have come up with quite a plenty brainstormings for it-- It still (still!) has ...

On the one hand, I don't want to make all my characters smokers just to be "edgy" or "authentic". On the other hand, if it fits the characters' personality, than ...

Thanks for the review! :D One little note here (I wasn't sure whether to PM this because it's kind of a little thing, but...) Officially confused here. I swear he ...

His words continued to fade. Everything was gone in an instant. Everything they fought for. \ I think there should be a "had" after the "they". Blood gushed out his ...

It seems like an intriguing idea, but you have to be careful about hiding Andy's blindness--something like that is very, VERY difficult to hide. I mean, she'll have to read ...

If you could look at all four my Vicissitudes stories I'd love you forever. They're in the titular folder; I'd link to them but I really have to go soon ...

The FIFA thing is called "soccer" in the US. "Tackle football" is, um...lots of padding and helmets? And the Super Bowl? XD I'm at a loss to explain this... But ...

First to review (I hope; I'm a bit slow when it comes to reviewing)~ The bus pulled out from behind me and out of the school compound as I stared ...

Er...if you could take a look at my Vicissitudes stories (I feel bad for asking, sigh). There are four (so far) and the fourth one has no reviews (sigh), but ...

If you could please take a gander at the third and fourth of my Vicissitudes story...they're not chapters in a novel, but interconnected stories, so you don't need to do ...

Seriously, the language in here is so bad...>_> I myself don't condone cursing, but cursing between every other word is such a part of Laurence's voice that to remove it ...

I feel horrible for asking this so soon after you did the first one already, but... Er, if you could take a look at the third Vicissitudes story...I'd love you ...

Thanks so much for the review. ~_^ It makes my day when people take the time to read my stuff and then comment on it! Wow...how did I make a ...

First things first--I noticed plenty of punctuation errors. The most prominent one had to do with dialogue. Por ejemplo, this sentence: “sorry, I didn’t mean to hurt you. I haven’t ...

I agree with Clo about the intro scene--there are so many characters and not many of them important that it just seemed to drag on and on. I feel that ...