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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Privacy's a luxury for the rich." ~Ren "I'll have my privay as long as I'm able to lose myself in my thoughts." ~Kutho "It's fun to play a game with ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"If it's food and I can cook it, I'll eat it. It's so hard to get fresh vegetables here." ~Ren "What's broccoli, some kind of human food?" ~Kutho "Aww, no ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: The Plot Game
The river was dammed to provide power to a hydroelectric plant that's trying to compete with a nearby nuclear power plant.
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Death's Master Chapter 1.1
Death's Master Chapter One Draft (part one) Warq looked down at the girl standing in front of his shack. He could do this not only because she was much shorter ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: The Imaginary Prologue
Hey fruityminyi, let me take a crack at your piece. To be honest, I don't see a point in combing through this line by line, because I think the problems ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Is this fantasy world cliche?
I like the sound of the different ways to perform magic, though I sure hope those names are only temporarily. "Bender" has aready been used in a fantasy setting, you ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Demigod
Hi, Torigirl, let me take a crack at these first two chapters. Be warned that my style is very in depth and nitpicky, so if you see big walls of ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Killer~1
Hey KitxKat, I'm going to take a crack at your piece. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth--don't let that scare you off. The club is pumping. ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: The Pack Chapter 1 Part 1
Hi Lethero, let me take a crack at your piece. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth, though I won't be as rambly as I sometimes am ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 2)
Hi Razzker, here's me for round two. I think you know what my reviewing style looks like now, so let's on to it, shall we? It was getting uncomfortable for ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 1)
Hey Razzker. Hope you don't mind me adding my two cents as well. Be warned that I can go very in depth and my style is nothing if not nitpicky, ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Prologue
Hi Porter, it seems like you've got plenty of good reviews so far so I'll try to keep this short. No guarantees, because I do tend to ramble. To be ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: Seasonless 60% of Chapter 1
Hey there, I'll take a crack at your revised version. Be warned that I can get very nitpicky and in-depth--I can write paragraphs picking apart an entire sentence. Don't let ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Assembly-- Chapter One
Hey there, Zan. Here's your review as requested. Hopefully it makes sense, since my sister is sitting behind me playing Touhou very loudly. Which is more than a little distracting. ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Free Reviews (until September)
Ah, I remember you talking about this project before! :D I'll get on it immediately. As for The Linked Worlds, don't worry about it. I've kind of...put that project aside ...
Aug 7, 2010
