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I'm on a roll, here! Seriously; it's good that I'm getting through these so fast--it means I wasn't so bogged down by errors and/or idiocies in your story that I ...

Wow...ummm... I liked this chapter as a character moment, especially for Emma--it's a very introspective piece and it definitely shows how much she's grown, how she's decided to finally accept ...

I'm not going to do the line-by-line thing because your prose is by and far fine (your most major problems being ones I've already addressed--the misuse of commas and talking ...

SHOCKER!!! I'm back--and I'm reviewing this! I know, I know I'm hideously late, but I promise that I will force my way through every chapter I missed and tear them ...

Title: So far, "The Wingless Girl" Genre: Fantasy Brief Summary: Set in a parallel universe where people have wings. A girl without wings is discovered, as possible proof that travel ...

Would you please take a look at the beginnings of what I hope will be the first novel I ever finish? It's a fantasy story, and has two parts up ...

Well...here's the rest of what I have of chapter one, so far. Again, I'd like reviews...and I really hope I'm not taking this too fast. With that said, go ahead ...

Pick a line, any line, from Bohemian Rhapsody. That song is so powerful on every level. One of the best ever written, and definitely gets my "epic" juices going. Also, ...

"I prefer numbers. Equations have always been easier to understand than people." ~Dr. Dirinel "Words, by far. I know; as a phycisist I ought to be more at home in ...

Would you care to take a look at what's possibly going to be my first novel (a very early version, however)? Thanks in advance!

Could you please go really in-depth on The Wingless Girl? Thanks in advance!

Er...I'd advise you not to call the story "Time Lord", as that name has already been taken by the great British science fiction show "Doctor Who"... Also, I'd read it, ...

Hi, Ghost (can I just call you that?)! Welcome to YWS. A few things--first of all, I notice you haven't reviewed anyone else's works here yet. The general rule here ...

Well, I'm back, after a long absence due to schoolwork and standardized testing. I probably can't stay long either because of the upcoming AP Tests, but after those I should ...

Please note that the issue isn't just about shooting or whatever; it's about having to explain a point in your story in a follow-up post. I've done it before in ...