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Re: Character Woes
...that sounds interesting, but the ending of the novel sort of hinges on the protagonist being alive, so I can't have him killed. >_> I know I have an idea ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapters 1-5
I promise I'll get around to reviewing this (all five chapters, if I can), but currently I'm in finals-studying mode for school. Once school gets out on Thursday, I'll be ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Title Feedback
A rather creepy fantasy in an urban/contemporary setting, about a doll's house maybe, or some sort of magical manipulation. The End of Time
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Serpent
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Anything I can steal from the vendors in the market street. I'm not fussy, as long as I can eat." --Nendo "Whatever Nendo likes, I guess." --Tey "Anything sweet." --Darian ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: Character Woes
After canning Zenith, Vicisittudes, and now the "Wingless Girl" which technically still has no name, I've finally resolved to yet again try what has previously been impossible for me--FINISH a ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: New Idea
Wow...I'm very fond of this idea. When I first read the dystopian futuristic setting, I kind of rolled my eyes because the idea, while it can be done well (i.e. ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Hellfire
This has definitely piqued my interest but seeing as I'm in full finals mode for school I can't get to this until school is over (Thursday). Sorry to make you ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Major Writing Block
That makes a lot of difference, actually. ~_^ I'm really glad you're not going to be glorifying the play, because that's just been so overdone already. I like that your ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: Major Writing Block
I'm intrigued by the idea, which is a plus because I actually heavily dislike the genre (love/school/abuse YA stories?), though I feel like it needs some work. I like the ...
May 16, 2009 -
Re: The Wingless Girl
Ack, please ignore this there a way to delete posts? >_> Because this is a total mistake...it's not meant to be here. *feels like an idiot*
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Star-Flight (Prologue)
Hi, Elentari; I'll be your reviewer for today. :) Steon walked up to the hangman’s noose. I'm not terribly fond of the phrase "walked up"; it feels a bit weak ...
May 2, 2009 -
Re: Dirinel and Irvin--the Wingless Girl
I'm waiting for more reviews of chapter one first (especially chapter one part two), so please take a look at those first before reading this. :) Also, the story's title ...
May 2, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Five)
“My, my, you really need to learn some respect for your elders. This is becoming ridiculous. For one thing, stand up straight and look me in the eye, please. All ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Four)
Wow...just... I knew even when I first read chapter sixteen, before reading the rest of the story, that there would be no conceivable way of saving Koreth (don't ask me ...
Apr 29, 2009
