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"The one that keeps me alive." ~Nendo "The one Nendo follows." ~Tey "The high road, not only because it's the right thing to do, but because it makes you superior ...

Here's part 2 of 3 for chapter three. I promise there won't be another monster of a chapter like this for a while (in fact...not until sixteen, I'd have to ...

"Drowning...especially in the river. But any expanse of water is just...unbearable." ~Nendo "Meaning nothing to anyone." ~Tey "Completely failing at everything I've sworn to do well in." ~Luanna "Lett

"Not really. I have no control at all over what's happening to me." ~Nendo "I was liking it up until Jyuna had to admit that to me." ~Tey "I have ...

Hi, Conrad, I'll be your reviewer for today. Prepare for a lot of nitpicking! The twisted shapes of the wooden animals looked different beneath the moonlight. Maybe it's just me, ...

Yay, there's more! Anyway, you know the drill. Time for more nitpicking. :) Over the next month, arrangements for the move to the Kalagat were being made. Is this passive ...

Ah, well...could you take a look at my Vicissitudes stories (romantic fiction)? :) There's nine of them, and currently I feel that the ninth and seventh are the most lonely ...

This marks Tey's part of the narrative, and is the longest chapter yet, so I will be posting it in three parts. Chapter two part B needs more reviews, so ...

Hi minimac, I'll be your reviewer for today. Prepare for lots of nitpicking.... :D The white gates in front of Maeve stood menacingly, supposedly inviting her in. Ack, you're using ...

I keep telling myself I'll stop posting these, since I have another project in the works...but I love the Vicissitudes stories too much to abandon them. Anyway, this is one ...

Wow, what they said about Nendo describes him exactly. It's kind of scary... Score breakdown (though I don't get this...) I Love Him, I Let Him Go 4 He's The ...

Please check out chapter two part A first if you haven't...it's seriously in need of reviews. Like I said before, if you make it through the entire chapter I'll happily ...

Errr, if you don't mind long things...could you take a look at "The End of Time" chapters one and two? Chapter one already has a good many in-depth reviews, but ...

If you don't mind really long stories...could you take a look at "The End of Time"? I'm not really looking for anything too in depth in chapter one, because I've ...

I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned I can get rather...nitpicky... I'm not intending to be harsh, though; just trying to help you be the best writer you can ...