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Re: The End of Time Chapter Four (Part B)
I haven't got much to say on this part, actually, except that we get some insight on Cura's character and it's a bit more exciting. Do look at Part A ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Dragonstar - Chapter 3
All right, first things first... Your paragraphs are massive. Especially on the computer, it's a headache to read; I'm sure they can be split up at portions to make it ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: Want a review, Do you? [Closed For Now]
Do you mind taking a look at the first part of a science fiction short story, "Other"? Thanks very much in advance! ^^
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: Mutts - Shapes
I feel terrible about this, but... This was just so good, I couldn't find anything to really critique. What I really love about these stories is that they're all so ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: Fishcake critiques
Would you take a look at the first part of a science fiction short story, "Other"? Thanking you very much in advance. ^^
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Jazz, mostly. I can't stand anything with electric guitars or excessive percussion, it hurts my head." ~Alice "My tastes are rather esoteric. I mean, I like Linkin Park and Beethoven ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Other (Part A)
Yes, I know I have a novel to be working on...but this idea just struck me so I wrote it all in one rush. Let's just say this is my ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"...I...I really don't know. I don't have time to think about something like that." ~Nendo "There's only one person I love, and as long as I'm with him, I'm certain ...
Jul 19, 2009 -
Re: Mutts - Passing
A few little things first-- Marcie turned to the screen next to her desk. One of her stiletto heels tapped against the makeup artist’s arm and Marcie pulled back as ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I don't really care about cuteness..." ~Nendo "Are you serious? Boys don't think things are cute." ~Tey "I like horses, and not ponies either. So I suppose I don't like ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Maiko of Gion
And I'm back! Fixing antiviruses can be a pain... I obeyed her words like law, and only engaged with Council members when she instructed me to do so. It was ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Maiko of Gion
Hello, foxfire, I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned that I do get very nitpicky and will point out things that bother me even if I don't have any ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
TEoT characters have already answered this question (or something similar), so I'll use the Vicissitudes characters. "Losing Vance." ~Alice. "That everything will change, too much and too quickly." ~V
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: The End of Time Chapter Four (Part A)
Well, after a long break, I figure I should get another chapter up ASAP. So here's chapter four, which reprises Nendo. I'm a bit embarrassed about this chapter, and I ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The Wooden Stick Challenge
I'd find a bedsheet and bucket to dress myself in, and pretend I'm Darth Vader and the stick is my lightsaber.
Jul 14, 2009
