Bickazer

Well, I'm criminally late. I really have no excuse. Feel free to tie me to a tree and shoot me until there's nothing left to shoot. This is a very ...

I'm back for another review. ^^ I'll try not to get so nitpicky this time, since I think you're already aware of most of the basic prose-level issues here. His ...

This is one of my favorite chapters, probably because it has the most Lord Darian in it so far. There's also some explanation of the magic system (about time). The ...

Please ignore all this. Somehow my computer messed up and posted the same topic twice.

7/10 I like how it immediately throws a conflict at the reader, and the details it reveals about your world. I'd definitely want to read more, but whoa...it's a mouthful ...

Hi, octo, I'll be your reviewer today. ^^ In the court of the great ruler of the Middle Kingdom, a young woman danced, entrancing all those around her. First off, ...

Hi, blaster219, it's me again. This will be my first review as an Instructor, so I'll try making it as in-depth as possible. So, he had been forced to fly ...

The rest of the short story. Enjoy and then have it for breakfast (that is, tear it apart). A word on the ranks: I'm using US Navy (I feel like ...

Antigone stole the words out of my...keyboard. XD The death scene at the end is simply chilling and horrible, but brilliant. A wonderful book through and through. It's been a ...

It's about time I get tho this. :) Hundreds of sharp spires rose from the depths, some in uneven pairs or trios, some with terraces providing security from the yawning ...

Hi, Master_Yoda, I've actually been meaning to review this work for a long, long time but never got around to doing it until now. ^^ I haven't read the other ...

Both are done, amazingly enough. Maybe it's because I wasn't doing that much writing today... Keep the requests coming!

Hi, playerj09, here's your review as requested. The Streets of New York were flooded with the bodies of Millions of former inhabitants. "streets" and "millions" should not be capitalized. The ...

Hi, ButterFlyInk, here's your review as requested. The moon was sheltered by thick misty clouds, which threatened a thunderstorm. Not a good idea to start the story off with passive ...

...I'm serious, no poetry. Be warned that I get very, very nitpicky. I will comb through your piece line-by-line, and even if I can't name specifically what bothers me about ...