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Hi ofir, here's your review as requested. Sorry it's a bit late, school has started for me so I've gotten rather busy. , there was tension in her face, and ...

Hi Rosey, here I am on the final part. I felt my lungs suddenly expand, as if a laugh had died. ? I don't quite understand this imagery. I didn’t ...

If you're looking for dark humor, anything Kurt Vonnegut is the way to go.

School has started for me, but I have the entire novel written, so should be able to continue posting it regularly. The second part of chapter seven reprises Luanna (after ...

All right, just to let you know, I had a very in-depth review about 75 percent written up for this before my computer crashed and, went kaput. I promise I'll ...

Hi Rosey, here's my review on the second part. ^^ This had been such a fun summer Meh, not liking this phrase. It feels very tell-y and too basic to ...

Hi, ofir, I'm back. ^^ If my last review hasn't completely scared you away... I'll try to be less nitpicky because I think you're already aware of the basic issues ...

Hi, ofir, here's your review as requested. The realm All right, you've got a wee bit of a problem from the get-go. The title should actually be written "The Realm", ...

This is the scene I was terrified of posting...because it contains this story's first real fight scene. And it's...well...we'll see. *ducks and covers* The End of Time Part One: The ...

Hi, Rosey, here's your review as requested. ^^ Only fairy-tales end that way, and my story is no fairy-tale. Minor nitpick, but "fairy tale" is two separate words, no need ...

1) DON'T excuse your writing. Reviewers critique expecting answers. The trick is to put those answers within the context of your writing. Do not answer them directly, that is, by ...

"No one, really." ~Nendo "Nendo." ~Tey "All the great diplomats in Earth's history." ~Luanna "My father." ~Darian "Seeing as no one has ever done what I am trying to do, ...

This will be long, since I'll add on the characters from the sequel... "I always try to do the right thing." ~Nendo "I...I really don't know...I don't think I have ...

And I'm back with the rest of the review. He hopped off the motorcycle and gave me a kiss on the cheek. This would be better phrased as "kissed me ...

Hi, taytay, I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned I will get incredibly nitpicky, and I'll point out phrasings that trouble me even if I have no suggestions on ...