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Hi, OnyxFire, I'll be your reviewer for today. ^^ The first thing I have to ask: is this prologue really necessary? All of this information and backstory seems like it ...

Congrats, Greeters. ^^ (And holy crap, Rosey...you are one insane reviewing machine.) Should have greeted more, but I let my discomfort at resurrecting days old topics interfere. XD Next war, ...

Just a little pointer, but it tends to be easier on the reviewers if you post each chapter in its own thread, insead of constantly updating the same one. I'm ...

Just wanted to say that last time I checked, I was a girl. ~_^ Also, looking back I realize it's not that I don't understand the sentence, it's that I ...

Hi, Pretty Crazy, I'll be your reviewer for today. ^^ She’s half fire dragon and half mystic dragon, giving her an unusual hot pink color. Be careful here...you're starting to ...

A belated welcome to YWS, Marion. ^^ Hopefully you'll find being here as rewarding an experience as I and pretty much everyone else has. If you have any questions, feel ...

I'm pleased to say that I'm free again, after being horrendously, criminally late with Jamie_rocks' request. I have no excuse. Sorry for those of you with poetry requests; I just ...

Hi Silversun, here's my review on the next part. He wouldn’t be allowed in, but I needed him by my side. It feels like an "although" is missing from the ...

Here's more of this (horribly late) review, as much as I can get through before I have to sleep. Again, I'm sorry for being so late, and you have my ...

That was...beautiful. Horrible, yes, but beautiful at the same time. I wish I had something more constructive to say, but honestly, I loved the piece. I was riveted, which almost ...

Hi, Tigerwolf, I'll be your reviewer for today. First of all, I'd have to say that Karsten and Master_Yoda both gave you very excellent advice, and you should definitely listen ...

Hi, Silversun, here's the follow-up review you requested. ^^ Apollo asked, his golden eyes simmering in the sun. This is a very odd image; I think of "simmer" as a ...

Hi, Silversun, I'll be your reviewer for today. Above my head, the Goddess Artemis cast down her pearly light which in turn made my shadow dance lithely atop the water. ...

Hi, Wang Chung, I'll be your reviewer for today. First of all, I've got to second the previous reviewers who've stated that your description is much too dense. Worse, it's ...

I'm back for the rest (which will just be my overall thoughts): As before, I really enjoyed this and wish I could come up with more to criticize, but honestly, ...