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^Amazing post, and makes very many good points. Reading over it, you realize that it's not just everything a good vampire story should have, but also everything Twilight lacks. I ...

Eragon and co....I actually like those books, not because they're good by any stretch of the imagination, but because I find them hilarious and great snark fodder. (And Murtagh is ...

I'm a firm believer in the story coming from your characters. It's characters that make a plot--any plot, no matter how cliched--come alive. Without strong, believable characters, your plot is ...

Holy paragraphs, Batman... The first thing I'd suggest you do is make those paragraphs shorter. It'll make your work much less intimidating to read through, and you'd get more reviews. ...

The first idea is reminding me disturbingly of the Flash family. Ditto what the others said about superpowers. As a fan of superhero comics, I like superheroes and superpowers and ...

Hi, Doctor, here I am for the second part. ^^ Well...the name change is a bit odd, and I'm not sure if I like it...but I'll get used to it, ...

"Look for a way out." ~Nendo "I don't think that could ever happen." ~Tey "Get out my communicator and try to access the Stellarnet." ~Luanna "Tch, I have to ask ...

Like many of you, I write novels set in the same universe. I wouldn't technically call them a series; there are five books and they follow one another in a ...

Hi, blackpencil, I'll be your reveiewer for today. I quite like this. Your descriptions are beautiful and evocative--I especially love the bits of personification you have: the river hurrying, the ...

"Really? Only eighty days! Fascinating, maybe I should make that the subject of my newest research paper. Whether it's conceivable for the world to have been created in such a ...

A fun, flightly, but good-hearted, kind of new-age, young woman. Lord Fareon

If it's possible to get away with Xavier not killing the guy at all, or not knowing that he killed the guy, that would be all the better. You probably ...

(Finally!) here's the next part of my review. Looking over it, I realize I got incredibly harsh, especially near the end, and a lot of that had no literary basis--it ...

This is the last of the currently written chapters I'll be posting. As soon as I can, I'll get up the first part of the rewritten chapter one and we'll ...

A very cute story. ^^ I have to say that I was confused at first exactly how old Jack was. Like Rosey said, I don't think that a little kid ...