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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Assuming I'm understanding the question correctly.... "Um...on my knee?" - Elia "You know what I'm gonna say, and it's gonna be pretty damn vulgar, just a warning." - - Kelomi ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: hehe, Character Q and A
Gonna use the MCs of my latest WIP. Gotta get to know them better! Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? Elia: My full name is Elia, ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: MUNERA Prologue (1)
Yes, I've decided to rework my Munera project from the ground up. This is the first half of the prologue, which I invite you to tear apart. One of things ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps (1.0)
All right, time I took a crack at this! Gryph and Stella have already given you excellent reviews, so I won't spend too long touching on the same points they ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One
Dude. I love this. You must do more. You absolutely must, or I unspeakable things. Normally I wouldn't be so emphatic about liking something, but I see you've said you've ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"'Cause that idiot macor jumped the ward and got himself bound to me! Like I want him to be my macor!" - Ren *glares at Ren* "I did all that ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I didn't ever go to school, so I guess I'm lucky." - Ren "School's some ridiculous thing humans came up with. Guess they need it, since they don't have elders ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I'm never gonna die!" - Ren "I'd like to go down fighting. In a blaze of glory, back to back with Sazuk." - Kutho "Well, I've got good life insurance ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: What Do You Think?
Just one note before we begin: the main character's name is pronounced akin to "Rah-DJOOM," with the "zh" sound approximate the "z" sound in "seizure." I would have liked to ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps draft (28/4/11)
Hi, Rosey! It's fitting that my first review in months should be for your story. Hahaha, by now, how many openings have you gone through? So you probably won't much ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Munera - 9
We move on to chapter four, which will be divided into three parts. The chapter begins with POV from a different character than Ren and Kutho, so don't be alarmed ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 8
The second (and last) part of chapter three. In the previous chapter, Ren/Kutho began their fight against Delk/Strear. Kutho did well initially, but Strear turned the tables and is now ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 7
Haha, wow, I am floored by all these awesome reviews. Truly I do not deserve them! XD Anyway, I think everyone who's been commenting and following. You're all awesome! Unfortunately ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 7
Finally, we're into chapter three! Thankfully, this chapter will be shorter than the previous two; it will only take two parts, instead of three. In the previous chapter, Ren, Kutho, ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 6
The final third of chapter two. In the previous part, Ren decided to take Kutho to the Munera center so they could search for Kutho's captured friends as well as ...
Nov 18, 2010
