Bhayden71297

Hey Ceely! Welcome to the best writing site you'll find! Haha :) This site offers so much! If you review, you'll get reviewed...easy stuff :) And I love being outside, ...

Hey! Welcome to the sight Abel! :) This is a great, helpful site! Everyone here is nice and you'll get many great reviews long as you review others of course. ...

Thanks! Puts up with a lot, poor Nate... Nice poem :) -Brie

I really liked this. The thing that caught me, was the ending. The last paragraph didn't relate with the past ones at all, and I'm just wondering...what was the purpose ...

Overall this was pretty good. Especially for being "new" at this, as you said. Your sentences could be combined to give it more flow. Otherwise, you read it choppy, and ...

Absolutely Brilliant. Beautiful. Very emotional. Captured each feeling. I felt as if I were the guy. Great job, -Brie

Thanks for the review :) I will make changes to this piece according to your review. Of course in my favor, though. Soldier was just a metaphor also. I'm not ...

This piece is simple but deep. The words you used -"innocent, wonderful"- they were so common but you made them do more for the story. You could, if wanted, (cause ...

This piece is actually very good. Well written. Simple and to the point, but tells a good story. It may seem as though short fragments don't hold a lot of ...

Based on a true story of life He was my Idol And everything I wished to be. Through thick and thin, He was there. To me, he was indestructible, Powerful ...

Your explanations were perfectly clear :) Again, as I said before, you've really helped me see what I stumbled over in my piece. And ah! I always get crazy with ...

Thanks for you review! I'm glad you found it funny and well written. :) I'll try to stick some description in there. I realized, too, that it there was more ...

(This is for the BIG random story contest. My random theme was: A judge in a doctor's office looking for a coconut. So...well here it is. Isn't the easiest thing ...

I liked the idea of this. Very much. I don't have much to say for this. Your grammar could be looked over. And watch your tenses. You should probably go ...

I really liked this poem because I could relate (unfortunately) very well to it. :/ You've captured all of the emotions and feelings of going through that. It's amazingly worded ...