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This is sweet :) And just adorable and cute. Love it. Great job, -Brie

It does help :) Thanks! And it's 100 on the dot actually...I'll look into it :) Thanks for the reviews -Brie

(This was for a contest on a different site. It had to be 100 words or less and contain personification. The contest is now over but I thought I'd put ...

Great poem. Maybe if you gave a little more on why he person feels cold and dark? Not necessary, but it would give the reader more of a background. Either ...

I loved this. Really did :) Such a simple poem, but holds so much emotion. The final two lines just wrapped it all up. A great finish to a great ...

Wow...that poem...was amazing. Beautiful. I loved it. It was deep with emotion and I couldn't help, but feel as if someone understands what I'm going through too. Whether this is ...

Thanks :) -Brie

Can completely relate... And yeah. Though you may feel that the word "fucking" fits because really writer's block can piss you off, it doesn't. Replace it or take it out. ...

It is about my parents... :/

(Please review this. I'll take anything...just nothing to harsh. :P) She snaps at him Annoyed He growls her Angry The fighting is like war It never seems to stop Sounds ...

Wow! This was great. Nice job, really. Your characters do not need names. You are right about that. SOmetimes, it's not necessary. It makes the story too distant. I love ...

I, for some particular reason, am drawn to this. I really like it! It holds depth and emotion, and I understand all too well. This giant metaphor shapes the whole ...

The plot caught my eye right away. :) Very well... But what also caught my eye was the no spaces between each paragraph. That's not even very easy to read ...

This piece...was adorable. I loved it. And, as impossible as this is, it set me to tears. Something about it just touched me so deeply. It changed my whole perspective ...

...Uhm...thanks. Wow. Reading that review...just punctured my confidence a little...and maybe my heart. Haha..I feel as if i was just stabbed... O_o Thanks for the tips though...I'll uh..look into it.