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XD And I thought I was the only one who talked to my characters! I like this piece a lot. Sounds exactly like me when I'm stuck on a beginning ...

(This is not an opening/prologue to a novel or anything. This is just a simple FLASH FICTION piece. I will not be adding much more onto this unless needed. Wants ...

Thanks for the review! But This isn't supposed to be a chapter or prologue or anything really. I said above that it is just supposed to be flash fiction- meaning ...

(A flash fiction piece. Wants to keep it simple and short, so i don't plan on expanding it too much. Reviews of any kind welcome.) Fists soaked in crimson, clothes ...

First things first....I loved this :) It was very cute (too me) and just a great poem. I know you said you wanted help with punctuation...but I have no clue ...

Will do Kels... Thanks, -Brie

(This is a revised version off my poem- I Can't Win. Please comment/review. Will appreciate it if you do.) She snaps at him Pissed that he’s drunk I turn away ...

Exactly what the person above me said....the feelings are perfect. Could relate to them a little too well. Just hopefully this isn't actually something from experience. It doesn't help... -Brie

Whoops! Sorry :/ And yeah, thanks for the review...I'll correct your name. Thanks, -Brie

I loved this! Completely! Omg it was amazing :) This is it. He's going to do it. She thought. This is it. I'm going to do it. Jake thought, sinking ...

This piece was good :)The title threw me off for sure ahaha! But it was great! The grammar/spelling mistakes i saw were already pointed out by the person above, so ...

Okay here it is- This piece was good. I liked the idea behind it. Could relate well, which is why I take such a liking to it. The emotion in ...

I'm glad you like it. And yeah...I wrote a second part to this...but I don't think it's very well written. I give the girl "she" a name...maybe I'll add it ...

I'm glad you stopped too! And sorry for reminding you.. Thanks for the review! :) -Brie

Hey! Welcome to the site! Hahaha auto-correct is hilarious :) can be. Anyways, this site is awesome. Everyone is overall friendly! Well the people I've met so far. And if ...